Open Poetry #19 |
Your Rude Interruptions |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
just needing silence the shush of an empty house save for my finger making words my heart making poetry. silence please just once more until I break through silence until my voice comes again until my nights are safe within smiles meant for my heart silence until that voice comes back and love's presence will be thick and soothing like calm cream silence while someone wonders! SILENCE EYES! stop reading my poetry stop right there! exit close the book of my life and stop exasperating me with sneaky scrutiny. shh.. silence anger while I love and am calm again until that voice. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. ~Sarah MacLachlan~ [This message has been edited by Temptress (03-21-2002 02:14 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well then...I certainly understand this one....and now I'm leaving...shhhhhhh |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... me toooooooooo... Now write some more good stuff... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"silence eyes". . . that one just stood out for me. . . the whole tone of this poem is excellent. . . and you make it flow very well. . . great job. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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