Open Poetry #19 |
Lie Down With Me.........a duet with Duncan |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hold onto me just a bit I will never walk away unless you ask me Hold onto me I need you to stay whatever you do don't walk away no matter what I might say Lie down with me keep it fantasy promise not to make any promises and I’ll promise not to leave I am not the friend you miss You are not the lover that I crave let's lie down, anyway Let me lay with you if only for a while I'll heal your ache you can find my smile I promise not to promise we can pretend it's all true I promise not to promise or ask anything real from you ~Duncan & SEA~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thunderous applause...standing ovation. What a fantastic combo the two of make. Sea's romantic spirit, and Duncan's wonderful turn of phrase... Wow.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A sweet deception...and a grand duet. ThisDiamond |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Gorgeous duet poem, SEA and Duncan. So sensually arresting with a wonderfully, flowing rhythm. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oooooohhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I LOVE THIS, I LOVE THIS!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) You two make such a beautiful team, sweet friends, may true love forever rest close to both your hearts and may your loves both fill you with true happiness! (smiles) You two are a delight to us all, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Duncan and Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very touching and romantic. I want to use the word *healing*..that was what came across so beautifully. You two du-et so well together....more please!? Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks guys!! and thank you Cowboy for writing with me I hope we do this again |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
The two of you wrote a splendid poem! Thoroughly enjoyed |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Fantastic work, you two! This is great! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well written! But really, Duncan. Straight out of the frying pan? I would LOL at this, but no, it really is so nicely written! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan/Duncan, What a tender compelling write. I really enjoyed this. Let's sea some more! |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wow, this was a wonderful duet! I truly enjoyed this, and the picture! I wrote a prose piece called Indian Love a few years ago, wish I had this pic for that one! Very nicely done! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is wonderful you two...BRAVO and more!!! Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this is great. You two did well together. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bravo you two! This is wonderful writing and that picture is beautiful! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow Duncan and Sea, this was sensual and soft, beautifully done. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A very nice duet. ((Susan and Duncan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done Sue and Duncan...loved the theme of this... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This has a beautifully haunting quality to it. I must say, this is great collaboration you two have penned here guys. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent duo. Enjoyed this very much. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much, I had a lot of fun writing with Duncan. He is a very talented poet, one I admire very much. and Tracey thank you |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
First of all, let me say...it's been a really long day! This was a blast to write with ya, Susan. You can sure make a little dog wanna run off that porch. (You'll understand later, trust me) Thank you all for responding. I would've jumped in here sooner but I was too busy running around to florists! Tracey...you got class, darlin. [This message has been edited by Duncan (03-22-2002 12:38 AM).] |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
heh. here's another perfect example of why _I_ think duets have a bad rap. good job, both of you. -Dave |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful duet.... With many thoughts to ponder Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Well done, I really enjoyed this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ & Duncan~ As lovely a duet as I've seen~ Nice blending of thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Duncan and Susan, guys this rocks...i love the flow of this poem and it's meaning...excellent poetry at it's finest...you guys make a wonderful team...keep it up!! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wow you two You did wonderfully! I loved the whole thing, but this was my favorite verse: "Let me lay with you if only for a while I'll heal your ache you can find my smile" I really enjoyed! Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is great, two if my favorite writers I love this poem. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
I love it!!! A wonderful duet you two! " I am not the friend you miss You are not the lover that I crave let's lie down, anyway " "I promise not to promise we can pretend it's all true I promise not to promise or ask anything real from you" DOn't we all just long for someone, just someone, to lie down with? I love it. ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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