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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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More It is Almost…...spring, I know one thing, Mine has swept away Even though I Had a say, participated, held it Like a child, Holding water in tightly cupped hands, Tasting…...life…... Then summer, She came to play, Then having had her day… Now, she Leaves behind her cardinal, Just so I may Hear the redbird sing, To know it’s spring Albeit someone else’s day I hold hands With me, standing betwixt Fall’s Winter Still…... holding……on Loving Wanting More But it is Your spring And Your summer Remember Enjoy! Do not rush pleasures…... Relish All More ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 17 February 2002 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, This is a ray if sun. An exceptional poem. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Karilea I love this, speaking of the little child in you, and holding on to youth, Oh I truly love this, my spring is gone too, boo hoo. but I love autumn, every season has it's treasure.  floriaFloria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, this is sooo beautiful and yet...a sense of longing as though comparing seasons with the stages of ones life. Now I feel a little sad...guess I still want it to be MY summer..if it can't be spring. And yet I know it is fall as far as years go now... The trick is to enjoy every moment of it! Oh, I'm going to have a cup of tea and go outside and skip, come join me! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
what wonderful writing you have done! Enjoyed. Thank you. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sunshine, you have beautifully captured my soul. Every second I am all seasons, living together, fused into one breath, one step, one me. I'm cold, I'm hot, I'm cool I'm warm, all at the same time. Wheeeeeee! It's like getting a sunburn skiing naked. At 69. Thanks for capturing these feelings. ((Sunshine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful words beautifully said |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful ....... truly a masterpiece and a thread to my library. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. I adore this I really do Nourish your inner child darling heart, and enjoy it more Truly your writing is wonderful, you write so well, scratch that you write brilliantly. Your clarity of expressing emotion is unique, well-done darling heart truly excellent writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) I too felt some sort of yearning behind these words as in wanting to crawl between one season to get to the other, but this is soooooooo beautiful too and shines with the sunshine your heart always casts! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may we all cherish each moment and find pleasure in each season! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
As I speak, all of my azaleas are in full bloom and the grass is green. It's 71 degrees. I enjoyed your poem very much, Karilea. Each season has something to offer. Michael Auguste~ |
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