Open Poetry #19 |
Sometimes |
Second_Guess Junior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 11 |
Sometimes Sometimes even with The one you love Speaking to you quietly You can still feel So alone Sometimes even with The knowledge That he loves you Your heart still Aches with loneliness Sometimes all you want Are soft touches Followed by Even softer whispers Sometimes your soul Needs the closeness That nothing else But the touch of His warm hand Stroking your hair So tenderly Like you were A priceless gift. Can give Sometimes you just Want to be looked at With such awe With such a sense Of devotion It makes you cry. Sometimes you need Simply what words Cannot give. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi This is one of the best poems I've read tonight! It has so much truth to it. Sometimes we all need reassurance and to beshown that we are truly loved! (hugs) RP |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I couldn't agree more with you very nicely said |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This one speaks so much truth. Sometimes we just need the soft kitty touch. |
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Bella New Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 6Ohio |
wow...how close these words are to me tonight. I understand the loneliness in a love that seems to be all talk, no proof. Know that amidst the anguish you may feel, you are not alone. above everything else, love one another... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Very real, and very well said!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! BRAVO!!! I couldn't agree with you more, I think we all must nurture love and in order to do so, we must accept and really show trust and commitment to holding it true! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent writing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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