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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-03-20 08:01 PM

Perfect Harmony
~*Marge Tindal*~

When your song of serenading
into my heart comes cascading
I am caught in mesmerize
of perfect harmony~

When within my poetry you find
a word-thought that stays in your mind
You are caught in a moment suspended
in perfect harmony~

It's in the one we have become
the tune the other hums
Each complementing the other
in perfect harmony~

If the day comes that you sing off-key
or should I fail to pen my poetry
We'll still live the moments so tender
of perfect harmony~

Foreverly~

To the man who completes me~
Bill, I love you~
March 20, 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-20-2002 08:05 PM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-20 08:11 PM

you know I love your foreverly poetry

"It's in the one we have become
the tune the other hums
Each complementing the other
in perfect harmony~"

just beautiful!!!!

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-03-20 08:21 PM

foreverly is heavenly!

((Marge))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-03-20 08:28 PM

Margie girl darling sister of my heart, this is utterly utterly wonderful, tenderly loving and a song of hearts in perfect harmony you know how inspiring I find your writing, and this sings the song in my heart. Truly divine writing, presentation excellent I love it darling girl.

One day I’m going to write a short reply and people will fall over from the shock I can never do succinct you know, but if I did it would be the words perfect poetry

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-03-20 08:34 PM

Marge, I am so glad that you are happy. And, that you have found someone to love and who loves you, too.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-20 08:39 PM

You are caught in a moment suspended
in perfect harmony~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yes! That is what usually happens Marge
There are always certain lines
where I just sit spellbound....
Loved this one! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

6 posted 2002-03-20 08:43 PM

"If the day comes that you sing off-key
or should I fail to pen my poetry
We'll still live the moments so tender
of perfect harmony~"

Beautiful lines, Marge

Years ago, my mother told me that life is seldom perfect but it does have it's moments.

It sounds as though you have a wealth of these perfect moments. Thanks for sharing.

Shenachie

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

7 posted 2002-03-20 08:53 PM

Marge, I am so happy that you are this happy. You so deserved everything and anything good that came your way.Your heart is as beautiful as your poetry, Friend. Incredible write.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-03-20 09:44 PM

Marge: So tender and charming! Your Bill is a lucky guy to have found you and vice versa!

Betty Lou Hebert

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2002-03-20 10:05 PM

And he obviously loves you very much, to inspire you to such beautiful poetry Marge. Your happiness shines through all your writing.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

10 posted 2002-03-20 10:17 PM

Marge,

how wonderful for you both....

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-03-21 07:34 PM

And Marge, in perfect harmony you love and
in perfect harmony you always write!!!

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

12 posted 2002-03-21 08:22 PM

Ah...the perfact harmony

How I wish we'd have it all.....

Wonderful sweet Marge.....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-03-21 08:34 PM

Perfect harmony said beautifully Marge, love this . floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2002-03-21 11:41 PM

SEA~
Thank you hon~
It's special to me too~

Marsha~
LOL @ 'One day I'm going to write a short reply'
You ARE NOT ! We won't let you !
Love you gal~

SmartChick~
Thank you so very much my friend~

Enchantress~
Thank you for picking up on that thought~
*hugs*

Bridget~
Thank you. I feel that my cup runneth over~

Saunni~
I sincerely thank you~

BettyLou~
Yes, we both feel so fortunate in this *BIG LOVE*

Tracey~
He is the inspiration of my heart~

AWhispersCaress~
Thank you, hon~

Magnus~
*quietly smiling here*
Thank you always for your thoughts~

MyEnchantedMelody~
I would wish it for all~
Thank you, hon~

Floria~
Thanks gal~
*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2002-03-24 04:43 PM

When within my poetry you find
a word-thought that stays in your mind
You are caught in a moment suspended
in perfect harmony~

Ooops. *G* 'Scuse me for intruding. *G* I know this poem is for Bill... but so many of us find within your poetry thoughts that touch our minds and hearts. (and I'm VERY good at singing off-key *G*) It could get embarrassing though if we stay suspended through too many moments... quietly shutting the door *smirk*

All teasing aside... this is lovely, Marge... may your sweet harmony only improve through the years. *S*

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2002-03-24 07:40 PM

SweetSuthernSing-A-Long~
I thought I heard that door shut !
You can just COME ON IN ... but ... promise ? not to sing ???
I take you at your word ... iffen you say it sets the cats to howling ... I'm believing you~

Bill says, "Hi."
We do need a stage hand ... you game ?

Thank you dearest lady~
Love you~
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

17 posted 2002-03-24 09:04 PM

Yep, you've played this one very well!

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

18 posted 2002-03-25 03:27 PM

I like this, harmony of love. Enjoyed.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

19 posted 2002-03-25 03:34 PM

William the conqueror of Marge's heart ... You LUCKY guy!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

20 posted 2002-03-25 04:57 PM

Karilea~
Thanks gal~

MirrorMan~
Glad to know you enjoyed it~

InterLoper~
*HUG*

Thanks so much everyone~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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