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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Perfect Harmony ~*Marge Tindal*~  When your song of serenading into my heart comes cascading I am caught in mesmerize of perfect harmony~ When within my poetry you find a word-thought that stays in your mind You are caught in a moment suspended in perfect harmony~ It's in the one we have become the tune the other hums Each complementing the other in perfect harmony~ If the day comes that you sing off-key or should I fail to pen my poetry We'll still live the moments so tender of perfect harmony~ Foreverly~ To the man who completes me~ Bill, I love you~ March 20, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-20-2002 08:05 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you know I love your foreverly poetry  "It's in the one we have become the tune the other hums Each complementing the other in perfect harmony~" just beautiful!!!!  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
foreverly is heavenly! ((Marge)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, this is utterly utterly wonderful, tenderly loving and a song of hearts in perfect harmony you know how inspiring I find your writing, and this sings the song in my heart. Truly divine writing, presentation excellent I love it darling girl. One day I’m going to write a short reply and people will fall over from the shock I can never do succinct you know, but if I did it would be the words perfect poetry   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, I am so glad that you are happy. And, that you have found someone to love and who loves you, too. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are caught in a moment suspended in perfect harmony~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes! That is what usually happens Marge There are always certain lines where I just sit spellbound.... Loved this one! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
"If the day comes that you sing off-key or should I fail to pen my poetry We'll still live the moments so tender of perfect harmony~" Beautiful lines, Marge Years ago, my mother told me that life is seldom perfect but it does have it's moments. It sounds as though you have a wealth of these perfect moments. Thanks for sharing. Shenachie |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, I am so happy that you are this happy. You so deserved everything and anything good that came your way.Your heart is as beautiful as your poetry, Friend. Incredible write. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: So tender and charming! Your Bill is a lucky guy to have found you and vice versa! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
And he obviously loves you very much, to inspire you to such beautiful poetry Marge. Your happiness shines through all your writing. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, how wonderful for you both.... ever deep...runs |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And Marge, in perfect harmony you love and in perfect harmony you always write!!! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Ah...the perfact harmony How I wish we'd have it all..... Wonderful sweet Marge..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Perfect harmony said beautifully Marge, love this . floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank you hon~ It's special to me too~  Marsha~ LOL @ 'One day I'm going to write a short reply' You ARE NOT ! We won't let you !  Love you gal~ SmartChick~ Thank you so very much my friend~ Enchantress~ Thank you for picking up on that thought~ *hugs* Bridget~ Thank you. I feel that my cup runneth over~ Saunni~ I sincerely thank you~ BettyLou~ Yes, we both feel so fortunate in this *BIG LOVE* Tracey~ He is the inspiration of my heart~ AWhispersCaress~ Thank you, hon~ Magnus~ *quietly smiling here* Thank you always for your thoughts~ MyEnchantedMelody~ I would wish it for all~ Thank you, hon~ Floria~ Thanks gal~ *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When within my poetry you find a word-thought that stays in your mind You are caught in a moment suspended in perfect harmony~ Ooops. *G* 'Scuse me for intruding. *G* I know this poem is for Bill... but so many of us find within your poetry thoughts that touch our minds and hearts. (and I'm VERY good at singing off-key *G*) It could get embarrassing though if we stay suspended through too many moments... quietly shutting the door *smirk* All teasing aside... this is lovely, Marge... may your sweet harmony only improve through the years. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernSing-A-Long~ I thought I heard that door shut ! You can just COME ON IN ... but ... promise ? not to sing ??? I take you at your word ... iffen you say it sets the cats to howling ... I'm believing you~ Bill says, "Hi." We do need a stage hand ... you game ? Thank you dearest lady~ Love you~ ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep, you've played this one very well! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this, harmony of love. Enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
William the conqueror of Marge's heart ... You LUCKY guy! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thanks gal~ MirrorMan~ Glad to know you enjoyed it~ InterLoper~ *HUG* Thanks so much everyone~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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