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Fly Away From Here
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Fly Away From Here |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Fly Away From Here By: Noah Eaton 3/20/02 I wish to fall into your arms but it's impossible I want to climb these mountains, is it probable? Do I deserve to love you or am I irresponsible? Is my mind just set to believe in fables? I just want to sprinkle your sheets with rosepetals I just want to believe in something that I never had Someone like me feels hollow deep inside I would give anything to hear you sigh I want to fly away from here Somewhere out there I hope you love me just as much as I love you I want you to know how much I'm trying to pull through I want to fly away from here My life has officially begun But I need you to keep me holding on I need your love... Blowed on a dandelion just the other day Watching the seeds hover and drift away Yearning for the rain to fall and soak them in the soil Making dreams come true in this deserted gravel I spot an eye on the first robin of the year I made my wish as I shedded empty tears All I need is you, my goddess lover Deep down I feel we belong to each other I want to fly away from here Somewhere out there I hope you love me just as much as I love you I want you to know how much I'm trying to pull through I want to fly away from here My life has officially begun But I need you to keep me holding on I need your love... I'm down on my knees God, will you let me hold her, please You're the one I need... You're the one I need... I want to fly away from here Somewhere out there I hope you love me just as much as I love you I want you to know how much I'm trying to pull through I want to fly away from here My life has officially begun But I need you to keep me holding on I need your love... I need your love... I need your love... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-20-2002 07:44 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah sweetie, this reads like a song...a lonely aching song. Lovely but, oh so full of longing. Enjoyed. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dear friend....love sometimes has it's moments....some we don't enjoy and others that we treasure for eternity....You write the aches of love very well.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy, this is utterly utterly wonderful, I love the imagery and the language in this. This as Nancy says reads like a song, full of longing and yearning. I know how you feel darling boy I really do, it’s so difficult to hold on in any distant relationship. But you have to ask yourself the one question that’s the hardest to answer ……… is it worth it? Love is worth any price, and true love is as rare as hens teeth, so if you believe it’s your true love then hold on darling heart hold on to Joanna as tight as you can. Absolutely wonderful use of language and vivid pictures I really do like this. If you were to ask me I’d say you and Joanna are made for each other.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is a beautiful poem, to fly you on the wings of love, to your Rosepetal. I want to fy away from here, too! Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautifully written dear friend.  ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is good Noah...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is a truly yearning poem and you did it well Noah, just beautiful. I hope you fly soon. floria Floria |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
noah....take flight...blast off... free flight on the rim of the Milky Way....mark |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, Noah, I'm sure she hears these words and more! You deserve the most awesome love there is and if it takes flying away from here to have that then so be it, My Friend! Great write as always, just wish you weren't hurting tonight. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah I could feel the pain and longing you hold in your heart and I hope you find true love and happiness. You are such a kind and deserving soul and I wish for you nothing but the best. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, so so wonderfully done... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...Magnificent song poem!!! I could feel your yearning and your desire for the one who has the key to your heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Noah, This was quite simply wonderful, full of yearning and love. Very well done. Nan |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
sometimes we all just want to fly away! Remember, good things come to those who wait! Beautiful song you've written here. |
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