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feline dreams |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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do felines dream of oceans of milk or seas of fish? a run through fields of catnip and windows with warm sunbeams? balls of yarn with forests of scratching posts? or does their dream come true when they wake up on your lap? ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
AWwwwwww this is purrrfect  Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Very cool, Sven. Got a couple dreaming next to me right now. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nicely written, Sven. cute! ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, I love kittys so so much, they always make me happy when I just see one and they are scampering with their ball of yarn! (smiles) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always a pleasure to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Hummmm...well from what I have observed, looks to me like they are having a grand time whatever they are dreaming of! Though I did catch him trying to "catch" something once. *S* A nice light-hearted poem Sven! |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
heh. my cat just stood up here and looked at this and said something that sounded sorta along the lines of "yowmrrrrreowwwwwwwwwllllowwwww." i don't know if that means she liked it or not; she's weird, and omnicidal. but i liked it. -Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ahh yes I do believe it's when they lap you up *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Sven. For sure they dream...of chasing butterlies in the garden, but they're always just out of reach. Hugs. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, since I am owned by 3 cats, I would say they dream about what trouble they can get into next Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sven, My big tomcat once told me That he dreamed of chasing the little poodle next door. ((Sven)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love it, Sven Pen. Sorry I haven't gotten to reply to your work lately. I've been reading though. This is just soft and adorable.  Probably like your heart.(which is the greatest ingredient in your writing) **looks around for the "flirt" officer**  They'll never catch ME!  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Carolina, thank you. . . my thoughts exactly. . . Duncan, thank you. . . I noticed that sometimes, they move about while they're sleeping. . .makes me wonder. . . Tier, thank you my friend. . . Noah, I have a ball of yarn here. . . would you like to play?? thank you. . . vandana, thank you as always. . . Dulcinea, that's exactly what I'm talking about. . . like I said above, it makes me wonder. . . Dave, omnicidal eh?? well, I'm sure she liked it. . . thanks. . . M, I believe that you're right my friend. . . thank you. . . Enchantress, makes me wonder if our dreams and their dreams aren't as different as we might think. . . thank you. . . Sandra, this might be right. . . they do have the quality about them, and I noticed that you said that you're owned by them. . . LOL Silver Streak, hmmmmm. . . he must be pretty big then. . . thank you. . . Temptress, soft and adorable eh?? well. . . thank you. . . and thank you for your comments. . . I try to make each poem my own. . . and, don't worry about the officers. . . I've bribed them. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yanno..I think this is so adorable that I need to bring it up for a second round. You're in my spotlight today, Sven Pen. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love cats... does that tell you how much I love this? *S* Thank you for these thought paths, Sven... I sure hope it's the lap. *S* Beautiful!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So very cute Sven..loved it.. ~Victoria
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very cute, Sven....  I love kitties....I used to have one, but had to give him away when he started using my plants as a litter box... ~furry hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - great write. Me thinks that when they wake up on ones lap is when they know they were in a dream but real... BC |
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