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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

0 posted 2002-03-20 03:12 PM

Since She Left

Days drip by
as sweat,
coursing slowly,
dehydrating hope,

since she left.

Stench of her loss
is still upon my skin,
as I grieve
and
as I breathe.

this foul odor.

~Michael Auguste~

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-20 03:29 PM

Yes Michael I know this feeling all too well. You expressed it well, I could feel your grief. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2002-03-20 04:46 PM

This is vividly expressed. I could sense it all. You write of life so well.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-20 04:59 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Michael, this is so very sad, dearest friend, I hope this is only a fictional poem of yourself though I know so many people feel this heartache every day and my heart goes out to them all! (sigh) This is so sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-03-20 05:01 PM

enjoyed

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-03-20 05:52 PM

nicely done Michael...as always..hugss

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-03-20 09:09 PM

Whoa. Where in the world did this come from? Somewhere very, very deep....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-20 09:13 PM

WoW Michael! I am speechless! What a profoundly strong write!
Well done. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2002-03-20 09:29 PM

Quite the stark image you paint with this one my friend. You convey the feeling very vividly in these words.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-03-20 10:55 PM

such a painful write...wow Michael....very intense

(((hugs)))

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-05-06 04:07 AM

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