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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2002-03-20 02:03 PM



Once…Without Words…


As if, in the passing of souls, an aria of old
hums softly in the beating of his heart.
notes which told of longing, now words
of a man’s desire spilling from his pen.
a void of question, there…known, but not conceived,
lingering on the brim of understanding…and so
it’s depth…masked.
penned enlightenment to love’s grandeur,
passion’s fury…the telling of pain
beyond narration
all intimately reminiscent of a
romance once told, long ago, without words.

achildsheart  03-20-02

Inspired by the voice of Sarah Brightman
and the pen of Coal Surrender

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

© Copyright 2002 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-03-20 02:08 PM




WOW!!! This is a fabulous retrospective account of a love affair that never got to be, sweet friend, I too love the works of Sarah Brightman soooooo much, just as I always love your words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have sucha  beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-20 02:09 PM


AWhispersCaress~
How nice to see you here with this beautiful piece~

How it lingers ...
'all intimately reminiscent of a
romance once told, long ago, without words.'


Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-03-20 02:21 PM


ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!!  This is just so beautiful...I am in awe of your talented pen.

***Ivy Rose

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4 posted 2002-03-20 02:27 PM


a void of question, there…known, but not conceived,
lingering on the brim of understanding…and so
it’s depth…masked.

Every word of this is remarkable.

vandana
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5 posted 2002-03-20 05:05 PM


enjoy
strbbux
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6 posted 2002-03-20 05:59 PM


Your pen did great work today. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-03-20 07:25 PM


I  love Sarah Brightman, too

nicely inspired
*
M

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8 posted 2002-03-20 07:35 PM


Annie, this is wonderful!  I too love Sarah Brightman...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
9 posted 2002-03-20 09:59 PM


Noah,

your responses are always so thoughtful, and I believe very heartfelt.  They are partly what inspires me to continue, even when I think I have written my last poem.  Thank Dear Sweet Noah.

Marge,

Such praise from you is truly taken to heart. Thank you.

Ivy,

I am so pleased this captured your interest, I appreciate your kind response.

A Whisper's Caress
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10 posted 2002-03-20 10:01 PM


Duncan,

A man of such few words, but so much intensity...Thank you, your applause is very appreciated.

Annie

A Whisper's Caress
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11 posted 2002-03-20 10:02 PM


Vandana, Floria, M. and Nancy,

thank you, each of you. I love the response to this, and appreciate each kind thought.

Thanks again, Annie

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