Open Poetry #19 |
Once...Without Words |
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Once…Without Words… As if, in the passing of souls, an aria of old hums softly in the beating of his heart. notes which told of longing, now words of a man’s desire spilling from his pen. a void of question, there…known, but not conceived, lingering on the brim of understanding…and so it’s depth…masked. penned enlightenment to love’s grandeur, passion’s fury…the telling of pain beyond narration all intimately reminiscent of a romance once told, long ago, without words. achildsheart 03-20-02 Inspired by the voice of Sarah Brightman and the pen of Coal Surrender ever deep...runs |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! This is a fabulous retrospective account of a love affair that never got to be, sweet friend, I too love the works of Sarah Brightman soooooo much, just as I always love your words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ How nice to see you here with this beautiful piece~ How it lingers ... 'all intimately reminiscent of a romance once told, long ago, without words.' Just lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! This is just so beautiful...I am in awe of your talented pen. ***Ivy Rose |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
a void of question, there…known, but not conceived, lingering on the brim of understanding…and so it’s depth…masked. Every word of this is remarkable. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Your pen did great work today. floria Floria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love Sarah Brightman, too nicely inspired * M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Annie, this is wonderful! I too love Sarah Brightman... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, your responses are always so thoughtful, and I believe very heartfelt. They are partly what inspires me to continue, even when I think I have written my last poem. Thank Dear Sweet Noah. Marge, Such praise from you is truly taken to heart. Thank you. Ivy, I am so pleased this captured your interest, I appreciate your kind response. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Duncan, A man of such few words, but so much intensity...Thank you, your applause is very appreciated. Annie |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Vandana, Floria, M. and Nancy, thank you, each of you. I love the response to this, and appreciate each kind thought. Thanks again, Annie |
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