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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-03-20 01:26 PM

Only to You

I want you to hear my
voice
then give back to me your impression
of its color

Tell me of its depth
as it whispers across
your soul

Let go of your inhibitions
if it delights you
in silk

Or if it cobbles your
walk to yesterday

Or rasps you a new home
where the sawdust
bears your footprints

Yes ~ tell me how
you hear
this voice ~
the one that speaks
only to you

only in
love’s tone

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-03-20 01:32 PM

Splendid poem, Soleil Noir. Beautifully written and full of exquisite notes of love.

***Ivy Rose

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-20 01:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this strums with such sweet melody and love, sweet friend, may your love forever swoon over the lovely words you write and forever respond back with the true love you deserve! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-03-20 05:09 PM

Soleil Noir darling girl oh my stars this is utterly utterly one of your best ever. This flows like liquid fire truly awesome writing. Rarely is writing this good, but this is truly outstandingly lovely.

I love it utterly I always enjoy your writing and this is just sooooooo wonderful. Such beauty is amazing to see you’ve brought tears of delight to my eyes. Wonderful Utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-03-20 05:10 PM

enjoyed

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-03-20 05:17 PM

SN
I'd say if it was me...soft and sultry. A very sensual poem, much enjoyed!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-03-20 05:41 PM

This is wonderful. love it so much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

7 posted 2002-03-20 06:11 PM

i liked it.
-Dave

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-03-20 06:13 PM

aww how pretty!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-03-20 07:08 PM

wonderful..something I wish I had written *s

M

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2002-03-20 07:14 PM

Just beautiful!

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

11 posted 2002-03-20 07:20 PM

Ditto! to all of the above comments.

Shenachie

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2002-03-21 12:09 PM

The color would be golden...like honey..

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