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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
0 posted 2002-03-20 10:08 AM


Untidy, My Life


Head cupped by hand,
softly touched by pillowed thoughts.
Mind wanderings scattered
above/ below the lids, in sought

Dreaming of the time
when tidiness becomes the norm.
Primped and preened and spruced and cleaned
and life becomes me new, transformed.

When smiles will waken to me each day
and face in mirror glows, esteemed
believing in the aftertimes.
Untidy, my life, converted, redeemed.

What angel will come to discharge her fill
Gift to me,  expressions'  quill...
© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-20 10:17 AM

What lovely thoughts Maureen, I would love that myself, great work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)
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2 posted 2002-03-20 11:11 AM

Thank you for the wonderful read.

Andrew

I give huggles for replies :)
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By the sea
3 posted 2002-03-20 12:40 PM

This is pretty, Maureen.

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-03-20 12:44 PM

Maureen,
Well done. Primped and preened and spruced and cleaned. An excellent line.
Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-03-20 01:03 PM

I enjoyed the images-dream on.

Nan
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