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High Noon
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High Noon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: High Noon A dinosaur of old bones Are my roots and fills my boots Grumbling quills the overtones. The sun is up, it's high noon Wolves follow the pastured sheep Babbling baa's of old tunes. Phantoms ride my sanity Festering on streaks of fear while Feeding vectors vanity. And ego plays clowns minion, Offering up wild daffodils, While watching o'er dominion. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! This is a powerfully haunting piece, sweet friend, you always have such a way with describing emotions, this had me both thinking about the past and embracing the future with mild fear, envisioning it! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, the cadence here is awesome, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, A wonderful comment, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Babbling baa's of old tunes. ================================ and that will be the coolest line I'll read today  Stinky...your innuendo and metaphor in this is so clever and deep that I wont even fuss about the "old" references  Tell Randy to shake out them old bones and rattle your cage *L*  mothy me Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
On the dino's soaring bones bubbles tar of melting stone Randy's quick to leave, I think before he teeters over brink... [got my muse amused this morning...thanks to you...] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You make me smile. Sunshine, You welcome. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
some images that are embossed with edges can feel them linger in my toughts they leave shapes after dug it sy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, Thank you for the read and comment. Vandana, Glad you liked. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour Hi there your writing is always a joy to read I love the internal beat of this your rhythm is always just perfect. Very well written and thank you for the pleasure of it   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I like. lots. "Festering on streaks of fear while Feeding vectors vanity." Seymour truly good work. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, For that you get a kissy. Floria, Thank you dear. |
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