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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I can not pretend today. I can't imagine you're still here. But somehow I can't comprehend a world without you near. I look the same-- my voice unchanged-- my days go on in the same way... But only half of me remains in pantomime of yesterday. Solaced words are meaningless, although intent is kind. I pray to dream a dream of you-- to see you one more time. And yet I lie awake at night afraid that I might sleep. I fear I will dream dreams of you, and wake again to weep. I won't say goodbye again. I can't leave you twice. I sleep-walk through a day's pretend, and bury you each night. [This message has been edited by serenity (02-17-2002 06:02 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sweet Serenity This is sadly beautiful. Hugs to you Gorgeous One.  Maree |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I look the same-- my voice unchanged-- my days go on in the same way... But only half of me remains in pantomime of yesterday. Solaced words are meaningless, although intent is kind. I pray to dream a dream of you-- to see you one more time. And yet I lie awake at night afraid that I might sleep. I fear I will dream dreams of you, and wake again to weep. I won't say goodbye again. I can't leave you twice. I sleep-walk through a day's pretend, and bury you each night. ======================================== OH good Lordy .... I was not expecting this from title .... *shaking my head at you* "But only half of me remains in pantomime of yesterday. you just tatooed THAT on my heart... good grief...another moth anthem baby... *sigh*(of solace) *S* (YKTIK) ... yes...we know..... you write the ache and I feel it me twin. heart-hugs for this one KA mothy me |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very sad. But very beautiful. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, An exceptional poem.  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
What Janet said.... and I feel every word of this.....Serenity, this is amazing.....and a keeper for sure.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - I agree, a sad but beautiful write. You do have a way of writing these... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Karen, this is sooooooo heartbreaking, my heart goes out to you and I hope now your heart is a pantomime with happiness and love on both sides! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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