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Dreamscheming |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In fantasy mine, dressed in black lace, soft eyes drift closed. You envision the maybes of me, in the shades of you, smiling at your indecision. Teasing the warmth of your whisper breaths the see-through of me, in illusions, captures the whimsy of eyes that reach down into my heart and pull up the hope and understanding that have settled within. Feeling the hunger of lessons to be learned you reach out, And with one softened kiss I am... forever yours. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jeez Maureen, this is so good! Keep penning these things, sweet poet friend. You are reaching deep within, and pulling up some amazing stuff. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, It just keeps getting better. I'm likin' that. Great job.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Teasing the warmth of your whisper breaths the see-through of me, in illusions, captures the whimsy of eyes that reach down into my heart and pull up the hope and understanding that have settled within. such a warm thought... very romantic my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A delightful read. Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiufl, sweet friend, may you forever hold the love of your life close to your heart and dream away in celestial fantasies of happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is dreamy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
You are indeed exciting! ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Maureen this is awesome, I truly love it. nice work. floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This my favorite Maureen...loved it hugss ~Vic
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, this was a good one! I like a lot! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Seems I can remember someone talking about writers block not too long ago...glad to see the road has been cleared... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Love the intricate beauty of each line of this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Midnitesun..thank you, I am a sucker for a good kiss..*s Larry .thanks *s....I'm likin' it too..the kissin' that is. C...hmm I love warm thoughts, don't you? Thank you hugss M Sy, glad you enjoyed * Noah, all I can do right now is dream...if only I can remember them. Silver One...exciting???..*s you make me smile ((Newell)) Floria...Glad you loved it. I appreciate your visits. hugss M V~ a favorite huh hmmmm...maybe I should re-read it. hugss M vandana.... thanks passing shadows thanks for reading *s Lady In White ..oh I never have a block, just may be too tired to write or think enough to make sense *s Thanks Ivy Rose, glad you enjoyed *s M |
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