Open Poetry #19 |
Sand Stones of Time |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beyond the mist twilight time are wings of a dew kiss morn where shores of tomorrow reflect tides of our love footprints from yesterday in search of our dreams as sand stones scatter memoirs in the seas where whispers of love creep over a bridge of moonlight to the other side where wishes come true and walk hand in hand with you "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-20-2002 02:40 PM).] |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
may your accumulation of the sandpebbles be a fruitful one and may your basket, never be worn from the weight of the stone. Love is for keeping. Jeff |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Would it not be nice if a bridge like that truly existed? Can you tell I loved it? The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish a bridge like this existed, so every one of us can run happily in tears to the otherside and embrace our true love happily without having to yearn so long! (kiss on cheek) This is so very lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, A warm and lovely read. Enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know I love this, Vic. Aside from the topic, which is the story of my life, it's a beautifully written poem. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria I would know one of your poems anywhere, you do have your own style and I love it. floria Floria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Jeff..lovely response as always hugs sharon..thank you..would be nice Sharon...nice to hear from you...thank you hugs noah..thank you..yes you would be first in line hugs sy..thank yoy so much..and for peeking in this morning.hugs sandra..you always make me chuckle..hugss thank you dear one thank you floria..so nice of you to say..hugss.. appreciate you nice comments vandana..thank you so much..hugss glad you enjoyed hugs |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your writing never fails to stir the senses, my friend. This is truly lovely. *hugs* Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Michael..nice to hear from you today..hugs..glad you enjoyed my words [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-20-2002 06:42 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
where whispers of love creep over a bridge of moonlight to the other side where wishes come true and walk hand in hand with you" ~V~ I love the feeling of this...beautiful HUGSSS Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love those memories, V... they will never be lost in time hugss M |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Lauren..always nice to hear from you ..hugsss maureen..thank you ..and for peeking in ..hugs |
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