Open Poetry #19 |
Set me on fire! - inspired by 1slick_lady's poem, "A Poet's fire" |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Set me on fire! - inspired by 1slick_lady's poem, "A Poet's fire" "Smoke rose from his nostrils; consuming fire came from his mouth, burning coals blazed out of it. He parted the heavens and came down; dark clouds were under his feet. He mounted the cherubim and flew; he soared on the wings of the wind. NIV Psalms 18 :8-10 These are the flames that send the blaze Of love's hot searing cleansing daze To carry souls into the blue Beyond all moons and Silver, too. Into far galaxies of light Into a land where there's no night And so I offer you my pen To enter in, my soul within. And when you fuse your soul in me My love will always be so free There is no bondage, in Love's star For you decide your distance, far. And just enjoy the magic of Eternal everlasting love For God in me is yours to savor In any candy, ice cream flavor. All I ask is that you, too Treat me the same way I treat you. Set me on fire! Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida March 19, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-19-2002 05:10 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
So many lines I love in this piece. "And so I offer you my pen To enter in, my soul within." and also the last two lines I adore. this is wonderful Newell. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria, for your kind words. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is soooooooo beautifiul, sweet friend, you always amaze me how you are inspired by others and you always write such wonderful thoughts in an instant! (big huggsssssss) This is a fabulous deal of true love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
newell...you honor me...this is so beautiful...nice to inspire a poet as fine as you...helen |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, helen. Glad you like. ((helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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