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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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judy sue seemed like a punishment instead of a name for a woman but she responded to both words and some others too, back then when she was dancing 30 hours a week standing, and a few more layin' down she tapped her nails on the formica, could have been a piano player if she could have carried a tune but she knew how to irritate with them nails so that counted for missed lessons and a concert tour. the china girl with bum equipment and a part way pizza wiped on guess they were white jeans brought the suits and the shirts monogrammed and starched heavy, wrapped in plastic with hangers tied judy sue might model it later, the plastic, if he asks just right and if he brought her a treasure from gimbals she might do her magic tricks again for the puppet man that brings her flowers and joined their initials on the jags and the keys to the villa down in malibu ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"...but she knew how to irritate with them nails..." in more ways than one, I'm sure... you're writing is captivating, so I would have another dose... soon... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, you keep me coming back WITH more, thank you for your eyes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well, I never left my initials on anyone's car except my own, you can be sure it needs some serious body work. And Sue hardly sounds meager, a girl just knows when to make her exit.  Nice slice DS~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...you are such a marvelous storyteller, sweet friend, your wonderful words always bring a smile to my face! (big huggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you truly are a master of descriptive beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the china girl with bum equipment and a part way pizza wiped on guess they were white jeans brought the suits and the shirts monogrammed and starched heavy, wrapped in plastic with hangers tied captured character in so few words as you have such a talent for doing... always a pleasure to read and addictive..leaving me wanting more.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Blues...she did come out ok....guess it was just timing..thank you babe for the read Noah, thank you my friend, always a pleasure to read your comments] Cpat, humble thanks for your moments here. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~your words are indeed addictive. My eyes crave MORE! Enjoyed with curved lips. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
as your eyes crave so do my words seep to touch let me offer them freely thank you ms |
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