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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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i went outside to admire the night on a comfortable chair relaxing my nerve a few minutes are passing slowly i come in to write to someone i know verily barely tickling i feel not so bad under my dress kind of rad something is crawling i looked a black bug gently being at the wrong place at a good time monique [This message has been edited by monique (03-19-2002 11:58 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
monique, Cute and clever, enjoyed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there's a quiet quality to this. . . a moment in time. . . well done. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, I am always delighted when even the smallest friends of nature come to visit me, I love butterflies and sparrows and every living creature! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Monique, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Seymour, i am glad you enjoyed it. Sven, i am glad you were able to catch the feeling of my quiet time of the bug on my thigh. Noah, thank you for the kiss. I have blue birds making a new nest in my back yard. A few weeks ago i cleaned their house and their was 2 eggs left in there from last year one was stuck on the side of the nest. monique |
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