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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
In the mirror finding the he of him lonelier without the she of him looking back holding his eyes with hers |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A beautiful image. Thanks. ((Decaflame)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very good work. Sad and lovely combination that reads beautifully. Cheryl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my! I love short pieces..and this one delivers a wallop! Excellent. Hugs. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always reflect mirrors of many emotions wonderfully! (big hugggssss) May the mirror of your heart forever reflect you and your love side-by-side hand-in-hand happily, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Deca darling girl this is utterly utterly brilliant. I thank you for your wonderful writing short and incredibly powerful I really do love this delightful and picturesque poem, it really painted the picture, something you excel at doing. Absolutely excellent writing Absolutely fabulous writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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