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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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I hold your body close so close, so close. We become one.. I feel you long... long for me. Melded we be. Your skin.... soft, perhaps a sin. The curves, the purrs... they melt me, longing even more to be... with you. With you. We are one.... we are one..... Somehow you are so far... so far. And your breath is but a faint whisper on my soul. We are one.... but one without a touch. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
I know this poem is not nearly up to the quality of those around here.... nor what I have done in the past. But this one means a lot to me, and meaning such, I wanted to share it with you. Enjoy as you wish.  ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sometimes it takes one who feels the same to feel the poem... and sometimes, mere words will never elicit the feel |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
So true.  ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
When I read this it reminds me of my boyfriend because he lives in North Carolina and I live in Maryland. We're always close and wanting, but so far away... but two more days and he's mine. God help him.  Your words are slow, clear, and defined.. you're being vague but the message is very clear. I like the repitition you used in this poem - it emphasized the importance and intensity of what you were saying. Thank you for posting this. I liked it the first time I read it and I still do.  "The most beautiful makeup for a woman is passion, but cosmetics are easier to buy." - Yves Saint Laurent |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with such romance, may the breath of your love forever whisper to your heart and bring light and magic to all your dreams! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Titus this is beautiful and from you heart, so it is a wonderful poem. We cannot always compare ourselves to others as we are all unique in our own way. love this. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so close... and oh so very... sensual. Enjoyed so much....hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thank you!  ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A wonderful poem dear sir, thank you for sharing it with us Andrew  I give huggles for replies :) |
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