Open Poetry #19 |
Two Very Special People |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Two very special people jumped from friendship into love everything went smootly she knew he was sent from up above. The couple hit a rough spot she nearly lost her mind he heard things that drove him mad he became angry and she responded in kind. The patched it up, or so they thought but to her something just wasn't right she tried to talk to a friend about it but instead she picked a fight. She did some serious thinking to find out what was wrong four hours of boredom gave her time figuring it out didn't take her long. She talked to him about it put the suggestion on the table after some thought he agreed only one question remained: would they be able? Because my friends, what they agreed is something I won't say between the two it is a challenge they may even start today. I will say something about the two they know that it is real; My point to this entire thing? Don't give up when life hands you a raw deal. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nicely said. ((Skyfire)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oooohhhhh...this is a gorgeous poem with a true and honest message, sweet friend, life is always filled with opportunities and when love and other precious things come our ways, may we always do what we can to hold onto it, for they are bound to shape our lives with joy forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well it is a fact that many relationships don't last very long because one or the other decides working out the problems isn't worth it and bails out... I think this is an important lesson to learn...being able to determine if the problems are too many and not worth spending the time or are they just the normal problems that will be found in every relationship...James |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wonderfully done Skyfire, and I agree with James, relationships are a lot of hard work, and it takes two to make or break them. Nice job! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Loved it Sky. I'd give you an indepth reply, which you know I do. But you also know why I don't feel up to it. But it was a beautiful poem, and it read very smoothly. Lovely ending. ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sky powerful message and poem. i liked this very much. thanks for the warm fuzzy! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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