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Mystic Mystron
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0 posted 2002-03-18 11:21 PM



The red sunrise lights up the sky
As the morning dew sparkles in the breeze
The first birds begin their song
So sweet and calming is their song
They sing of love and the freedom they have
a freedom to fly,to soar apon the wind
Thier songs greet the morning traveller
Reasurring him of life and the beauty around
He stops to listen, and to reflect
A lovely flower catches his eye
It's colors perfect in all respects
As he watchs it a bee lands on it
Now it is not only beauty but food
He continues on his way content
That it is once more a perfect day.

[This message has been edited by Mystic Mystron (03-19-2002 12:05 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Wilfred Gardner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-18 11:29 PM


How lovely! To have a perfect day, flowers, bees....whatever makes your day seem perfect. Thanks for the warm smile this poem gave me.
Dulcinea
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2 posted 2002-03-19 08:55 AM


I believe, like that bee, that if we have enough for the day, it is always a perfect day! Nice thoughts!

**check the spelling on the word Their...you might want to do an edit!**

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3 posted 2002-03-19 09:07 AM


Lovely thoughts here Mystic!  
Now if something could just be done about these cool temps!
Enjoyed my morning read.  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-03-19 04:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too can't wait for the beauty of spring to come to Colorado and everywhere else, now when is all this snow going to melt? (big hugggsssss) We all love you so mcuh, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wilfred, thank you for sharing!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Mystic Mystron
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5 posted 2002-03-19 11:08 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies.

What snow
Mistletoe
here it is green
no snow to be seen

Thank You All

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