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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Too Far Gone .... ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ Please stay thus pleading in strong urging from gentle arms In tormented pull she turned away so he could not hold her tears She must go before she was just too far gone to turn around' ~*~ Turning from where they found love Late was just too late to matter somehow Please, Please come back within the reach of my arms aching so for holding you again She, half-turning, stayed - for she could go no further than the caress of his fingertips crossing a chasm of I-know-I-should-go, but ... 'I'm too far gone to turn around' *Inspired by my fella ... when he sang to me~ I love you baby~ March 18, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-19-2002 08:57 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is utterly utterly divine, you know how much I love shapes, and no one does them better than you darling heart. Truly awesome, the shape is perfect the flow of the words so utterly utterly excellent. Nothing cloud be smother than this little beauty    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such sweet inspiration! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My how that man of yours does inspire! Wonderful Marge...enjoyed so much tonight. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
~~sigh~~ I know this feeling. Its exasperating and wonderful at the same time.  enjoyed! How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...your writing and the feeling of being too far gone...James |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Lovely, Marge....i hope 'too far gone...' works in your favor.... |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Marge you went too far with this poem the reading of the poem and its shape is a good melting perfumed potion monique |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
loved it marge. But you make me sad. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You rock girl ! Love ya' Martie~ Thankee ... yes, he is ~ Enchantress~  Yes he does~TemptyOne~ You got it ... exactly~ JamesMichael~ Glad you enjoyed my friend~ Amigo~ Definitely ! ! Monique~ Thank you so much~ JamesBowie~ Awwwww, sorry ... you read the 'sad' interpretation - BUT ... 'she, half-turning, STAYED !' *Thanks everyone ... and especially you, Bill~ For your songs inspire my pen~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
How grateful you must be to have Bill inspire you and be able to create such wonderful words. Love the shapes you do. I have yet to figure out how to do this. But it's fascinating. You do it so well. Hugs my friend, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is wonderfully beautiful. great work. floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Thanks hon~ Marti~ The 'poem' sort of has a mind of it's own. The words meander down the page creating it's own shape. A little tweak here and there and it's SO FUN to do~ Floria~ Thank you, sweet lady~ I sure enjoy sharing them~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow sweet Marge... This is really wonderful... The shape.....the words..all just so wonderful. Thank you dearest.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the inspiration your fella gives you... love even more the love that fills your lives. *S* You just stay gone, sweet lady... your heart looks good painted with smiles. *S* (By the way... I meant stay gone into love... not gone from here! LOL) [This message has been edited by suthern (03-20-2002 01:09 PM).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
*sigh*.......... lovely!!! |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt, this is purely wonderful, the words the shape and you most of all. I’m so filled with wonder at this pretty impressive sight. Thank you for placing it here to delight and thank you uncle Bill for inspiring my auntie so. You take care of her she’s special  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this "too far gone" place is where I would like to be, Marge. Sure is better than being close enough to get pulled back. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Hey, thanks everyone ... guess I was 'Too far gone' to get back to thanking each of you for the beautiful replies~ *SuthernGal ... wouldn't think of 'not' being here~  Me wub you to pieces~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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