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all alone in darkend mountains of canada
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all alone in darkend mountains of canada |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
the answers we left behind the doorway to our song as laughter ends in tears for the lost in all of us can you hear the Sun rise coming through the midnight rain? can you hear the angels singing through the clouds of pain? the truth is finnally found to the lock upon my soul it whispers carefully or you may destroy it all can you see the sails of the ships beyound the shore? as they clamber out to sea where I must now go angels and the sonnets that transferd me to this have open up my heart again so I can trip once more this futile try at majesty can keep its opulance so I can find myself with eyes that face the wind again. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You need not be all alone when you come home to fine comraderie and poetry...welcome home, long lost Michael G.... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
~~sigh~~ truly sad and melancholy...well written! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssssss) Oh Michael, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I pray with all my heart soon you will find all your heart is looking for and pierce through the wilderness of your fears and find true solace! (sigh) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
your poem is rich with sadness i pray for it to leak in the lake at the foot of the mountain to big to climb monique [This message has been edited by monique (03-19-2002 01:08 PM).] |
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