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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Connected I lay alone and I can still feel the echo of his heart beat so close is our joining my breath is his in repeat I memorized the very smell of his skin and the texture of his touch uniquely finger painting a life’s canvas as such his lips have pressed mine a million times feeling just like the first knows the worst and best parts of me the passion that burns and quenches my thirst separate are our bodies yet our souls are but one stringing together our hearts never to be undone "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (03-19-2002 06:16 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was a tough one to pick a favorite part, but I did... "our souls are but one stringing together our hearts never to be undone" Absolutely exquisite work. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Helen, This is one of the most touching poems I have ever read. You will always love him. He is the only person that showed you love from the beginning. You've both loved each other and been together a long time. Some things in life we never get over. You have a different kind of love that last forever, something other people know nothing about. It's a gift. Treasure it. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Helen, your deep, deep love is like God's love for us. And when it's not returned it just gets stronger and stronger. And it always be beautiful! So relish it!  ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, A warn lovely poem. Enjoyed |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sweetie this tugged my heart and I gotta compliment ya for this honestly is a treasure of a poem that I read here2nite... Hugs2u1Slick... *~coco~* |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
They seem like little things, at the time . . . to remember. \\ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* wordless I find myself wandering into serenity when reading the work you breathe. a lovely Helen poet did I say wordless? Ahh!! inspirational  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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