Open Poetry #19 |
The Exquisite Pearls |
amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
When your tears roll down your cheek It is not a sign of being meek or weak, It is just the emotions at its peak And not holding them back makes you unique… Let it all flow, to your heart's content That's one of the ways to give it a vent At times, it helps you to reinvent The reasons behind, & what they really meant… It may happen when your mind is adrift, An outflow of feelings, a little too swift; I feel so thankful,we have this gift The requisite pearls, at times,to give us a lift. [This message has been edited by amigo (03-18-2002 07:17 PM).] |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I never thought of tears that way before, very interesting thought! and a lovely presentation...nicely done! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed the read Andrew "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amigo darling heart Wonderful writing, as always you delight when you write, and when you write in this style you excel. Beautifully portrayed view of tears. Absolutely excellent Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Amigo, I couldn't agree with you more, I cry a lot, but I am proud of it because then I am able to express my feelings so clearly to others and I feel happy in the end after speaking of my grief! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, the true people that are strong are those willing to cry when they have to, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ This is ~ You have strung the thoughts and the photo into an exquisitely done jewel of writing~ *Applause* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Dulcinea ~ Thank you dear, for your words here... Andrew ~ Thank you, my friend....so glad you enjoyed it.... Marsha ~ Thank you Mushy for your sweet words luv & hugs to you too.... Noah ~ So happy to hear that you feel good about crying...that's the key, you're right...strong people try not to bottle up their grief & let it out when they need to....thank you for your words... Marge ~ Thank you for the applause, margie dear....big hugs to you too.... |
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