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Skyfire
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0 posted 2002-03-18 01:43 PM



I can't believe I did this
I screwed up royally bad
This is what is going on
To make me go so mad.

My friend is getting married
In 6 coming days or less
I have no idea what to give them
I'm in a big huge mess

I was thinking maybe a poem
But I'm not sure if that would work
Knowing her she'd burst into tears
Or maybe... maybe that's a perk...

Any help that you could give me
I would surely love to have
I don't want to give them the usual things
Cause that would just be sad.

Toaster... no. Coffee pot... nope
Maybe some dishes or cutlery?? Nah.
I'm at a loss here people
Just please help me out!!!

Please help?

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 2002-03-18 02:23 PM


Think a poem is a great idea.

Cor

Victoria
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2 posted 2002-03-18 02:27 PM


I love vases..just a thought...im sure she will be able to use it. Have fun at the wedding..hugs

                  ~Victoria~

D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2002-03-18 02:30 PM


I think a poem from you with the reminders of your friendship will do. You may use images of things that you shared with it.
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4 posted 2002-03-18 02:42 PM


RJ,
It's right before your eyes,
No reason for more of your sighs.
The reason I can plainly see,
Is that it was once done for me.

A poem would be so grand,
Istead of something bland.
A gift that is one-of-a-kind,
Coming straight from your mind.

This is no time for you to be shy,
Grab your pen and give it a try.
If you fail to even really try,
That's what would make her cry.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-03-18 02:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too think a poem would be the perfect gift for your friend, you can write exactly how you feel then you can have it framed and plaqued so it looks so beautiful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I hope I helped your concern in any way! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
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6 posted 2002-03-18 02:54 PM


A poem is a grand idea, a personal one filled with memories and perhaps some congrats...you could use a fancy font and some pretty paper, and maybe even have it framed...*S* The posibilities are endless...
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7 posted 2002-03-18 05:47 PM


I think a poems is about as personal as you can get, frame it real nice and it will be they're favorite gift
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8 posted 2002-03-18 06:29 PM


I'm sure you'll come up with something lovely sweetie

"I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro

jwesley
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9 posted 2002-03-18 06:36 PM


Ah, a poem, no less, with words carefully chosen from yer heart...maybe on a parchment type paper and fancy script or caligraphy font (probably find what ya need on the internet...type "fonts") and maybe with a picture of the three of you faded away in the background (almost translucent) with yer poem atop of it, might be pretty.

You can always come up with the 'ordinary' Skyfire, to meet the due date which is so short and come up with the extraordinary a little later...say after the honeymoon or the like.  It would then be doubly appreciated I think.

jwesley

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