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Little Miss Muffett |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I was taking a bubble bath one night I saw a spider beneath the skylight I was relaxing as I watched him crawl across the top of the ceiling wall then he disappeared out of sight and I thought everything was all right but all of a sudden he appeared he jumped upon the edge of the tub he dove into my gardenia bath disturbing my primrose path I screamed and jumped out of the water quickly thinking, I pulled the plug down the drain it went ..yes . . .UGH instead of sweeping it under the rug as I stood there dripping all wet I felt like little miss muffet i guess it was her spider i met *true story* "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-17-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Ohhhhhhh my gosh, this had me jumping out of my chair, this is indeed a shocking experience! (kiss on cheek) Did you have your curts and whey close to you on the moment of this occurence? (smiles) This is such a delightful piece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Oh Nooooooooooo Mr. Bill! Sounds like a hairy experience! For myself: I like to keep a leg up on the insect population. You know, the arachnid was not scared, that is until he Spied-Her! ~getting out while the getting is good~! jeff |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Now this would make for a good home video! I don't think Ms. Muffet would like taking a bath with her spider either, then again some spiders are good! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
LOL Victoria...Spiders are so interesting... and your poem rings so true. I am definitely ROFLing right now!  hugggssss for you but not that nasty spider! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah..that spider had a mind of its own..thanks dear one...hugs jeff..it certainly wasnt afraid of me ..must have peeked in through the skylight ha..thank you jeff ..hugss lori..thank you..my mother said that my grandmother would never kill a spider she would always pick it up and throw it out the door..but im sure she wasnt naked while she did it haa...hugs lyra..it was sort of spooky..i watched it and than it went and crawled from my sight and next thing i know it is in the tub with me..i couldnt believe it..it was a red spider..thank you lyra..hugss [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-19-2002 02:02 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O No! Wow! What a delightful story. A spider crawled into her tub Just wanting a tiny little rub She frowned She yelled and screamed and splashed like rain and quickly pulled the bathtub drain Sucking down The spider quickly lost it way Just went down in the hole that day And drowned. ((Victoria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you newell..a very nice reply the spider had good eyesight ha.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nothing like a bug to ruin a nice peaceful bath! Fun story. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria, I'm in favor of relocating the tiny creatures, but being naked I can see why you couldn't. Makes for a cute write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sandra..thank you hon ..hugss...i guess he just felt like getting a bath with me ha.. nancy..thanks but i think he relocated himself to heaven ha..im sure he drowned when he jumped in..hugs |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ LOL I HATE spiders....so i would have freaked....but what a cute write....this should be a rhyme in a book.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
YIKES!!! I have a TERRIBLE fear of spiders. Now you're gonna give me nightmares. LOL! Hey, Victoria, call Orkin!  Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lauren..well it was better he visiting me in the tub instead of my bed haa. thank you michael..i fear scorpions worse ha..after being stung especially..hugs |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Victoria, a great story, you must be one of the bravest woman that I know of and the spider must have been one of the dumbest ever, you've given a picture which gave me a smile for a while. Enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
~~shiver~~ That brought to mind the spider that was in bed with me last week...dang! I jumped up so quick I twisted my ankle some, but that sucker wound up a hairy little ball in the trash can! Teach him to take a hike over my behind! *LOL* Oh, I dislike spiders!!! (and my hero here was NO help!For him, a leg up means, I am outta here! hehehee) Loved it!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thanks Rick..i dont know about brave but he did scare me ha..the nerve of him. Thanks Dulcie..my daughter-in-law had a long centipede in bed with her once ha...hugs |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Spiders scare the heck out of me-because they jump right at you. I'd have been screaming my head off and running through the house naked and dripping. Nan |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very cute Miss V.... jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you nan and jimmy..it happened so fast i didnt have time to be scared haa..just jumped out real fast ha.. |
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