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tearpearl
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0 posted 2002-03-17 08:49 PM



Sometimes I’m afraid of making the biggest mistake of my life
Sometimes I cry, and a feeling deep inside my heart
Tells me that I’m about to lose all that I have

Sometimes I wish, that I could be bold, tell you all that I feel
Sometimes I cry, and I know that life is
Slipping through my fingers.

Those are the times my heart freezes
And those are the times that I change
And I want these times to last forever

I just need to be understood
I don’t want you to give up
Because I don’t want to give you up


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1 posted 2002-03-17 09:04 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Oksana, you are never alone, I think every one of us has these kind of feelings, and we all are tied to fate, but I believe with all my heart as long as we believe in ourselves and our dreams and captivate each moment with hope, we will never intend to make these mistakes and all we desire will come true for us all! (sigh) I wish the greatest happiness to come to your heart forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-03-17 10:10 PM


Hope both of you can stick this out...James
Tracey
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3 posted 2002-03-18 12:20 PM


Yes, sometimes I….feel the same. Good write Oksana.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
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4 posted 2002-03-18 12:44 PM


Tearpearl, we all have those feelings but never give up on yourself. This is a great write, filled with lots of emotion. As Noah said, you are never alone. Remember that.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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