Open Poetry #19 |
Sailing A Memory |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sailing A Memory ~*Marge Tindal*~ I have set my sloop to sail the warm and windy seas Billowing in softest breezes of your memories~ ~*~ Touched upon a storm or two as boats so often do Sailed right on through them with gentle thoughts of you~ Caught a wind from off the bay that gusted full-the-sails Reminding me I'm often caught within your windy gales~ ~*~ Dropped anchor in a heartless town just off the Port of Spain Heard the silence of your voice in tow calling out my name~ Underway once more to you returning at full-speed You've only to blow a thought my way to fill my sail of need~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Charming and a delight to read. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is another of your wonderful and melodious heart songs. The rhyme and the rhythm in this is flawless, truly excellent. The flow is as smooth as a ship over a glassy sea. This is excellent writing, perfect presentation and sheer delight from beginning to end. And yes I LOVE IT, but you knew I’d say that. Absolutely first class writing darling heart go to the head of the class Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Marge ... sailed through my mind with a whisper ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Cool one, Marge. It's beautiful and the pictures you've added are also. Nice write! Be well! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It's great to see you so happy, lady! Cor |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I love this. It is simply beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seems love does good by you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
It's snowing hard here in MA; if only I could get on a sailboat and sail away to the coast of anywhere warm! Great poem that conjured up wonderful images. I met a brand new baby girl on Saturday. Her name was Delaney! Cute, but not as cute as your Delaney. :-) Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...EXCEPTIONALLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! So very well-written. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Thank you so much sweet poet~ MarshaLove~ Ahhhhhhh-me love ... You're spoiling me, ya' are~ Lub you~ Kit~ 'sailed through my mind with a whisper' Now THERE's an inspirational line ! ! Love ya' Saunni~ Thank you so much dear~ Corinne~ Thanks gal - I am~ Dee~ Thank you sweet lady~ Hootie~ Nice to see you drop in gal~ Marti~ Awwwwww ... another Delaney ... how sweet~ *Auntie hugs* to you~ IvyRose~ Thank you so very, very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
You've only to blow a thought my way to fill my sail of need~ --------------------------------------------- floating with the words & the pics i am, Margie dear...thanks for sharing... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ And you delight me, my friend~ Thank you so very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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