Open Poetry #19 |
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Sailing A Memory |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Sailing A Memory ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() I have set my sloop to sail the warm and windy seas Billowing in softest breezes of your memories~ ~*~ Touched upon a storm or two as boats so often do Sailed right on through them with gentle thoughts of you~ ![]() Caught a wind from off the bay that gusted full-the-sails Reminding me I'm often caught within your windy gales~ ~*~ Dropped anchor in a heartless town just off the Port of Spain Heard the silence of your voice in tow calling out my name~ ![]() Underway once more to you returning at full-speed You've only to blow a thought my way to fill my sail of need~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Charming and a delight to read. ![]() |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is another of your wonderful and melodious heart songs. The rhyme and the rhythm in this is flawless, truly excellent. The flow is as smooth as a ship over a glassy sea. This is excellent writing, perfect presentation and sheer delight from beginning to end. And yes I LOVE IT, but you knew I’d say that. Absolutely first class writing darling heart go to the head of the class ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Marge ... sailed through my mind with a whisper ... just lovely! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Cool one, Marge. It's beautiful and the pictures you've added are also. Nice write! Be well! ![]() Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It's great to see you so happy, lady! Cor |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I love this. It is simply beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seems love does good by you ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
It's snowing hard here in MA; if only I could get on a sailboat and sail away to the coast of anywhere warm! Great poem that conjured up wonderful images. I met a brand new baby girl on Saturday. Her name was Delaney! Cute, but not as cute as your Delaney. :-) Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...EXCEPTIONALLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! So very well-written. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Thank you so much sweet poet~ MarshaLove~ Ahhhhhhh-me love ... You're spoiling me, ya' are~ Lub you~ Kit~ 'sailed through my mind with a whisper' Now THERE's an inspirational line ! ! Love ya' Saunni~ Thank you so much dear~ Corinne~ Thanks gal - I am~ ![]() Dee~ Thank you sweet lady~ Hootie~ Nice to see you drop in gal~ Marti~ Awwwwww ... another Delaney ... how sweet~ *Auntie hugs* to you~ IvyRose~ Thank you so very, very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
You've only to blow a thought my way to fill my sail of need~ --------------------------------------------- floating with the words & the pics i am, Margie dear...thanks for sharing... ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ And you delight me, my friend~ Thank you so very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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