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Lies…..Pieces Of Soul
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Lies…..Pieces Of Soul |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Lies…..Pieces Of Soul Lies drip poisoned spite Into hearts of sorrowed shell Led torn fragmented Into raging hell Trust begins to writhe Then twisted in pain Lies rusted in Broken Pieces of soul Pain drips from lips Torturing the Eyes which have been Blinded by lies Burning holes in Truth twisting into Misshapen bent Words of Anguished cries Fall into Tattered Pieces of soul Deceit drips from eyes That confuses Hearts which lost Hope through despair Struggling in a Morass of pain Misdirected into Avenues of blind alleys Left alone Shattered Pieces of soul Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aye..this hurts mightily...but a piece of soul left behind for some angel to pick up... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, Sorry about that. Enjoyed the read strong paint. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Truer words were never spoken. Thank you, Krissy, for your wisdom.  ((Krissy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my this is good Krissy powerful. floria Floria |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Krissy - This is some very powerful writing, and I am not lying to you.lol This is very good. Dave |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very powerful... and so very true. A liar takes trust and uses it as a doormat... usually without conscience. Well written! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Krissy, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope now everything all is alright and the angels have answered your hearts cries and have put hope in trust in you you deserve so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Krissy!!!!!!!!! Can you write??? I will answer that! Heck Yes! *smiles* An important concept to master: how to tell lies from truth and even more important, to realize the effects it has on others so as not to repeat that soul-scarring damage. I wanted to tell....out of all of the responses i get, yours really effected me. I am not one to dote on responses, i just like to share poetry and talk about them, but the fact you and your mother looked specificially for my work...its beyond humbling, and it pays this poet in full for all his hard work to make the words a fabric we can wear with our eyes and minds. Krissy....You have made this man very happy! Thank you. I look anxiously forward to seeing what other topics you write about. Please tell your mother thank you for me, too, will you? You have the bestest day ever today! Your friend, Jeff ~half million smiles for you~ etc etc hehehe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, to say you can't write would be a lie and I would not want those words of deceit dripping acid from my tongue. So I will simply say you have talent and understanding, a sense of metre and a sense of word usage... in other words a poetess. Well done! Kethp Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Krissy, So that's what it was! I wondered where all those holes in the carpet were coming from! Nan |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Krissy~ Very powerful.....Peace to you.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Krissy, Don't tell your mom...but you are very wise for your age. And I'm thrilled you share it with US!  Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow, Krissy! Truer words were never spoken about falsehoods. Truly Impressive! Shenachie |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Krissy....you have certainly penned well the effect of lies....So difficult to deal with another person when lies play into the relationship...affected trust so deeply.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Broken, tattered and shattered.. I love the repetition...yes a very powerful piece ..*s M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are very talented, Krissy...and wise beyond your years. Your wonderful mother has a very brilliant daughter. I loved the strength behind your words. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKrissy~ A little 'Special Auntie' advice ... GET OVER IT~  This IS marvelous ... you know~ Now ... find the happy bubble and POP one for your Auntie~  *Hugs* ~*AuntieMargieGirl*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Krissy...such a strong, powerful piece on anquish of the mind...just remember, that since you can pen this down, you can pin down that who would do this to your state of mind... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krissy, hello dear! just wanted to say this was a powerfully intense write...and i hope you feel better now at having got it out. sometimes it really does help to pen how we feel and you have done a wonderful job at describing your emotions! i felt this... take care love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Krissy Wonderfully written and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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