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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-03-17 02:33 AM

just wanting it to work slow
creep through my veins
and seize the mood of my heart
like strong liquor
on its way to wreak havoc
on my inhibitions.
drained
evident swallowing of tender nothings
makes a brazen soul barren
and sadness grips life ever harder.
ramble
enclosed in words
licked and sealed in the dormant succulence
of words too wet with tears
to read.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
this must be the age
when its too late
the only reason I feel age
is because I know much
has been passing before my eyes
and life
just
hangs on a little longer
waiting for the little girl to catch up
But moods are playing keep away
with my daily stability
its like they're on the sing song
play swing
and pummeling through hard air
the force rattling chains so hard
there is a tickle in the grip of hands
that scatters bones in giggle.
bracing myself for nonsense
I and my pen
my pen and myself
my pen and I
I and this pen
we all wander around
aimed aimlessly while we create
creating new roads
not fully understanding where we're going
until we arrive
in a blissful state of realization
that we truly have a purpose
no matter how random.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my pen and I
we know myself too well
and we are exhuasted
in our search for words
to make the miracle of us
happen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
unwind with me love
whisper to my passion ears
please draw me closer
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

1 posted 2002-03-17 02:37 AM

i observed a real poet in this lil ramble through the place we know the best....mark

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-17 12:47 PM

(sigh) These are such wonderful rambling thoughts, sweet friend, may you and your love grow closer together in love and share a true faithful happiness together always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet frindd, you truly are the master at fabulous rambles! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifwer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

3 posted 2002-03-18 12:12 PM

In the observations of the mind, there is the heart. You find it here.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-03-18 01:23 PM

Temptress,
Enjoyed the read.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-03-18 03:03 PM

I wonder. . . can we observe ourselves?? or, can only others observe

well done. . .

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