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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
From softest ember she imbues her light in shades of reds and blues flickering ‘round the nimble mind daring you, her heart to find. Light that warms, yet doth kill fascination at her will tame her? There is a doubt she’s only yours when she is out Warm your hands on her smile but beware of her wile she will woo you closer in envelope you within her sin Saddened then, at her demise blackened in her cold dead eyes mastery of her passionate ire douse you now, this passion’s fire. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lusty gem, and quite inspiring my sweet DeVine...I do so enjoy your work... and a warning to be headed well may I say!!! ThisDiamond  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your writing...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Poet deVine, Love your poem. My view is slightly different. I think man gets what he deserves. Here are my thoughts about passion. I ask you, Tell me if you can Is not God a burning fire? Is Passion, God in Woman? Is that why she is higher? Than an evil man. Just wondering. ((Poet deVine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
library  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
A girl I once knew comes to mind as I read this piece... and now I feel like listening to The Cure or something... Great poem |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow..a very good write..*s she's only yours when she is out..yes I like that line very much! and like Temptress into the library... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fire can be that quick...very good, Sharon! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Passion's fire can indeed burn in the embers... Well done, PdV... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...such passion fills your words, sweet fridend, this is absolutely gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) May the flame of eternal love forever burn in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!!!  This is a repost because this old brain is not working as fast on the new stuff as I'd like...sigh. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . I don't remember this one. . . but, I'm glad that you posted it again. . . poweful in meter and in subject. . . excellent!! ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Excellent write!... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I just had to read this with a title like FIRE. Well done. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice poet, enjoyed this much. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Saddened then, at her demise blackened in her cold dead eyes mastery of her passionate ire douse you now, this passion’s fire. It sounds almost too hot to handle, PDV....... Excellent writing!!!!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
interesting, i liked it  -Dave |
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