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Personal Observations? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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you've caught the visual of me and failed to see beyond the expression on my face. If you tried to consider my heart as closely as you consider my face then you may know me more. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A girl perhaps I'm happy this way bottomless innocence like black coffee cream swirled with just enough wisdom altogether sweet and blended light for slow addiction. A woman? Only by observation of others. I just wanted to be a girl. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ angel sydrome sunny version of another world inside a woman. brilliance hypnotizes eyes are tricked from the encore as its curtain swings with heavy fists of velvet dazing the audience so that they forget that they almost saw a hint of imperfection of sullen self pity. Dazzle them bedazzle hearts with the famed signature of being altogether too real. Never a better actress than the one behind the words behind the pen cowering and peeking around running to kick life into everyone then cowering again. hide and seek dazzle them with a glitter of heart caught just the right light in the sun of talent. But acting behind a pen is easy could she turn her face to the world without embarassment and nervousness spraying her face with red uncertainty? How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah, believe me, it comes with time, and then, if just right...you will still be allowed to blush... well done! I enjoyed this personal observation... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A woman? Only by observation of others. I just wanted to be a girl. Ah! Sweet Temptress, I believe you are at your very best just being a girl. Like my sweet little sister. I like you both that way!  ((Temptress)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, these are such powerful sincere thoughts, sweet friend, you will always be a girl at heart just as you are a loving woman with much grace and compassion to share! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, you sure know how to write introspection. I’d be afraid to look this deep. Good one Jen If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
they might look more at your heart if your face didn't look like... that!  nice to see this kind of growth Jenn. C |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
... i just noticed that at this moment, your posts number 5150 (pshyc term for "danger to yourself and others" as well as being the name of Van Halen's best album...lol) be careful... it would explain a lot. C |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmm. . .I see that you're wondering if you're looking at yourself here, or if you're looking at yourself the way that others see you. . . and, just how personal can those observations be??? questions that we all ask. . . great job. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Is hard to observe oneself. Great ones here. |
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