Open Poetry #19 |
Travel Intrigue |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Repost: Travel Intrigue The intrigue of pictorials, Cinderella attire Offered in subliminal form Sets desire on fire. Transference lulls a glitzy sleep. Moonlit figures dance ballet. Tittering wink and champagne drink, Lures you into interplay. Veiled within surreptitiousness, Flirtatious syrupy water. Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp, Makes for a heady mortar. Vivacious waiting elegance. Promised tete-a-tete so sweet, Page and page of dream on dream, Harvesting your thoughts' complete. To guest or not to guest the theme. There is no question but a scheme. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Invite me, come; ask me, stay; tell me, leave! and go your way... that I spent a moment with you made me a keepsake memory or two... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Now that is a ray of sunshine. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception. Wonderful flow and rhythm, as you seem to always do you’ve painted the picture to PERFECTION. You write so perfectly Call me into dreams with you A dancing dream just for two Spin the dream into a song Come and dance all night long Dreams confection spinning free Won’t you dream dance with me? Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You always write the perfect comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Transference lulls a glitzy sleep. Moonlit figures dance ballet. Tittering wink and champagne drink, Lures you into interplay. Veiled within surreptitiousness, Flirtatious syrupy water. Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp, Makes for a heady mortar. Vivacious waiting elegance. Promised tete-a-tete so sweet, =================================== To guest or not to guest the theme. There is no question but a scheme. ==================================== You must have the same travel agent me moody muse uses when she takes off without me love the clever word play and rhyme scheme theme here me Stinky love... "Flirtatious syrupy water. Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp" you were talking bout raspberry tea here werent you Lets book a cruise on the Love Boat sailing on the Raspberry Sea..Randy can be the Capt. LOL *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll bring the sugar You bring the tea. And we'll head out to sea. Winkiewinkie Randy stinky. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour hi there this is such a dreamy poem. I like this it is so descriptive or those dreaming moments. Well written you really are an excellent writer Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is soooooo delightful, I know this feeling so very well, there is no feeling more dazzling than travelling in dreams and finding the many suprises that await! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah for the read and comment. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
i love this Seymour I thought it to be so charming, floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Sy..a lovely read.. nicely penned ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Floria. And thank you Victoria |
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