Open Poetry #19 |
Dream Spin |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awaken in the glaze elusiveness Fever, deep and dry conclusiveness Open in the moist night air to quench Awaken in a pool of raindrops drench Struggle to the feet and footing fleet Wide-eyed and confusion pensively meet Open in the moist night air to gasp Awaken in the after once now passed Gaining of the concept and forces wild Fever of the blood entrance beguiled Open in the moist night air to shine Awaken in the freedom of another time Copyright Kkh 3/15/02 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aye...to know there are other times to be relived...enjoyed this one! |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Dreams do bring us back to memories past. Nicely done. Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is a wonderful expression of revisiting the visions of yesterday and incorporating them with modern emotions, sweet friend, this poem spins with such sincere thoughts! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ 'Struggle to the feet and footing fleet Wide-eyed and confusion pensively meet Open in the moist night air to gasp Awaken in the after once now passed' PERFECT ! I awaken nightly to the dance of muses through my dreams~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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