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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Water spills on papers. I thought when it dried out, it would be like before, but stains destroy its youth. Nothing I can do will make it smooth again. My heart is stirred. If the disturbance disolves, like salt in water, then there's trouble no more. //1. When a heart is rotten, it's bankrupted //2. Once love fades, will never rekindle again. Eliza Simmons |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your words cry out the anger of pain... the final lines, like the final stake through the heart. Much emotion well written. ThisDiamond |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Everyone has a down time every now and then in life time. Eliza Simmons ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (03-16-2002 11:55 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This made me think of the way I feel when someone I care for walks away from me...my feelings start to change...and it is never the same again...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am really feeling this lately...very well said  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Eliza, this is so very sad but true, sweet friend, I feel when we all lose something dear, the aftermath will always be tarnished with pain and all we can do is carry on and find a new love to replace rather than trying to cope with the puzzle of the previous setback! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
When something we love is lost, it's sometimes hard to express our pain.You have done so here and hopefully will help to heal.Keep writing. Peaches |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks peach and Noah. It's hard to accept new love sometimes. But I will get better. Eliza Simmons |
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