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Open Poetry #19

Desolate (twenty or less)

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

0 posted 2002-03-15 07:58 PM

Black mittens trimmed with lemonade
Reiteration's masquerade
To help reprise such fallacy
Our mirth defies our legacy

Umbrellas remain closed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-03-15 08:05 PM

...Perfection!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-15 08:07 PM

WOW!!! I am speechless, sweet friend, this is a marvelous response to the challenge, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderfully crafted! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Allan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-03-15 08:23 PM

Damn...I like this!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-15 08:37 PM

You always make me read your work three or four times....and then I'm usually speechless...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-15 09:06 PM

Of course, I knew you would excel in this. Great work Allen,floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-03-15 11:36 PM

cool write Allan.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-03-16 04:18 PM

WOW Allan, this is a very deep 20.
Sandra

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