Open Poetry #19 |
Sisterhood (Lauren & Donna) |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Greeneyes & Donna With eloquence and grace her words do impart In sisterhood of words we're all sisters of heart. Look high above the clouds share with me your sorrow Least there be a doubt in strength, a better tomorrow. Share with me your joys that which brings you light Let me gaze into your soul through emotions that you write. The foundation of your heart has remained tried and true A great friendship, from the start has never left me blue. Let me revel in your spirit allow me to feel your pain as I hear your whispered words falling like the gentle rain. Upon this earth voices softly call from sea to sea we need only listen Hand in hand we will stand tall Your pain and sorrow never a burden. When the waves become to rough in the storm, I will be your harbor Rest upon my shores in peace where serenity lasts forevermore. Rest your weary head upon the sands feel the power and emotion There surrounding you in sisterhood and devotion. This common thread held A bonding beyond compare A beating heart as one That in spirit we poets share. A sisterhood of faith you never need to doubt A rare and special grace let me never do without. Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-12-2002 11:16 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Girls, Totally Awesome! I love this and it's friendship defined. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you two are wonderful sisters of beautiful poetry to us all and always fill your hearts with song and inspiration! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let me revel in your spirit allow me to feel your pain as I hear your whispered words falling like the gentle rain. Upon this earth voices softly call from sea to sea we need only listen Hand in hand we will stand tall Your pain and sorrow never a burden. ==================================== Lauren rhymed again!!!!! You two this is a WONDERFUL tribute to friendship found thru poetry. Donna...your gift of cadence is rubbing off on her (but we wont ever let her stop those rambles) way cool you two!!! :rainbow You never knew what I loved in you, |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Wow .... look at what I have been missing!! Excellent work, the words hold a warmth so true. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Writing with Lauren is a wonderful experience. She gives such inspiration so effortlessly. There is a special bond through words as we all know, and a sharing among the women through hearts. Thanks to all and JM, I don't EVER want her to stop her rambles as they are BEAUTIFUL! Hugs to all, Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-13-2002 07:58 AM).] |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
What a wonderful collaberation individually the parts are works of beauty but together they become so much more special. Thank you for sharing such a great poem with us Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren and Donna darling girls this is utterly utterly gorgeous, thank you for this delicious and wonderful beauty of this. This is utterly outstanding Individually you are fabulous writers, together you are awesome, this truly is a duet of hearts and spirits. Utterly utterly wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very Pretty Lauren and Donna..enjoyed reading your sweet words...hugss ~Victoria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Fantastic! I love it. The Passions Sisterhood is the best! This duet flows with love and friendship. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSistersOfTheHeart~ This is perfectly lovely~ A melding of two kindred poetic spirits~ 'With eloquence and grace her words do impart In sisterhood of words we're all sisters of heart. 'A sisterhood of faith you never need to doubt A rare and special grace let me never do without.' Gals, this is BEAUTIFUL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderful! Just Wonderful! ((Lauren and Donna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful in every way! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful. You work well together. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hey Guys & Gals, This was a tremendous write with Donna and we both had a lot of fun, hopefully bringing forth a message of Sisterhood, among poets, and the 'sisterhood' we have found in each other..as friends...Thank you Donna for your constant friendship in unconditional manner and your strong support thru the years....Love you my friend and sister..... love to you all.... thank you for responding....HUGSSS Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-14-2002 08:15 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful duet from two of our lovely poets...what more could Passions ask for? |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunshine~ You snuck in there on me.... thank you for your kind thoughts and warm heart.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-13-2002 09:40 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"This common thread held A bonding beyond compare A beating heart as one That in spirit we poets share. A sisterhood of faith you never need to doubt A rare and special grace let me never do without." These verses were fantastic. Great job you guys did here. lovely work. floria Floria |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Wonderful verses individually and when put together a powerful poem depicting the sisterhood through poetry and heart. A fine collaboration from two of passions poets. Great job gals. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again a very humble thank you to all. This was a fun write. Lauren, unconditional....always. Hugs to all in poetry land, and thank you... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lauren and Donna this was beautiful!! a wonderful tribute you two have created to sisterhood and friendship...such lovely words from the heart and it's such a beautiful thing for us all to witness. take care. amy "just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Take two beautiful hearts, put them together and what do you get? A lovely collaboration you two, just wonderfully done, and such perfect flow to your tribute to sisterhood. Well done both of you! The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
buried in the back pages as I was reading I found this little masterpiece showing the glory of the sisterhood shared at Passions and between two friends. This was an incredible duet between two sisters of words, and hearts. Thumbs up to both of you. |
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