Can A Song Be Sung Forever

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-15 05:23 PM

I can write in words of love
that bring to your soul a ring
I can pen the thoughts I feel
as my words flow and sing.

Your heart melts from the flow
of notes that sing of joy within
Your soul slips,slowly lets go
as our song flows from this pen.

Can I love you....as I love you...
Can I give you....all you need...
Will you love me, with love true
For your words....do deeply feed.

Can a heart...melt with passion
as the melody takes us away
Can I sing...this song of vision
for you....on this day....this way...

Can a bond be bound forever
as two lovers become as one
Can a heart find the treasure
of newfound love...just begun.

Can a man, sing of another..
of a woman born pure and free
Will a man become a crooner
as he sings in tune with thee.

And when the whisper is over
as the dawn becomes the day
Will you love me true forever
as a sigh takes our breath away.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-15-2002 05:24 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-15 05:25 PM

You know Magnus, this truly does sound like a song. It would make a lovely song. Very well done. Beautiful work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-15 05:26 PM

Magnus,
I think so, Enjoyed.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2002-03-15 05:56 PM

magnus,

this was a beautiful write!! and yes
i think a song can be sung forever
especially if it is sung this lovely!!

take care.
amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2002-03-15 06:23 PM

very nice.... forever sung in a forever snug : )
Happy thoughts
Connie

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-03-15 08:11 PM

I heard this music very well indeed...thank you so very much for sharing this with all of us...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-15 08:15 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too think this would make a gorgeous serenade that will always melt your sweetheart's heart! (sigh) This is such sweet music of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-15 08:38 PM

Why certainly it can be sung forever!
And this piece is very melodic!
~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2002-03-15 11:32 PM

I believe it can. Magnus, loved this one.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

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