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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-03-15 04:12 PM

Soul

Coalescing
Crescendos
   ceaseless
     wonder

I have stood on seashore
watching line of wave
overtake the sand in drench
lapping recedings following
tide to be pushed higher with
each waxing moon

ecstatic touch
this meeting fluid
leaves ears filled with rhythm
and eyes staring in filled awe

Slide over me
that I might like sand
  be moved in the wet of you
   then blown on wind to lie
    until the moon again visits the tide

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2002-03-15 04:41 PM

*soft sigh*

~Tier

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-15 04:41 PM

This is so nice and it is deep Cpat, I like how you worked the beach and water into the human side of the poem. very nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-03-15 04:46 PM

ecstatic touch
this meeting fluid
leaves ears filled with rhythm
and eyes staring in filled awe

I've stood on this same seashore. It is a breathtaking view.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-03-15 04:49 PM

Mmmmm, I like it.

Nan

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2002-03-15 06:19 PM

My My My.... This is to cooooool
Connie

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-15 06:48 PM

Slide over me
that I might like sand
  be moved in the wet of you
   then blown on wind to lie
    until the moon again visits the tide

Now..I would love to feel this again *s

M

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-03-15 06:55 PM

ecstatic touch
this meeting fluid
leaves ears filled with rhythm
and eyes staring in filled awe

Slide over me
that I might like sand
  be moved in the wet of you
   then blown on wind to lie
    until the moon again visits the tide
===========================================

I've said it before....
You dont play fair Capt.

keeping this one

You never knew what I loved in you,
I dont know what you loved in me ...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be.

Jackson Browne

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-03-15 07:17 PM

Cpat

You touch such a sensual cord with this..makes the view magic. Wonderfully done, as is your custom.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-03-15 09:00 PM

Whoa.....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2002-03-15 11:49 PM

I am SO keeping this one!!!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-03-15 11:54 PM

very romantic ron...

nicely done

~Victoria

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-03-16 04:16 PM

THIS is how I want to write.
This is my favorite yet.
Sandra

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2003-10-27 04:25 PM

Just giving myself something to cling on to...

phhhhhhhfffffffffffttttttttt.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2003-10-27 07:52 PM

I have stood on seashore
watching line of wave
overtake the sand in drench
lapping recedings following
tide to be pushed higher with
each waxing moon

ecstatic touch
this meeting fluid
leaves ears filled with rhythm
and eyes staring in filled awe

Slide over me
that I might like sand
  be moved in the wet of you
   then blown on wind to lie
    until the moon again visits the tide

==================================

Im so glad Susan brought this one back up....
it's in my library..as are SO many of yours...
You posted this before my trip to VA and now,
reading the words after having been tide taken...they are even more stunning, and leave the moth aching to write like this.

wanna teach the moth-grasshopper how oh gifted sensi?

When you and that muse of yours come off strike *S*...maybe you and the moth can try another duet? You always could inspire me to write even when I thought there was no poetry left in me...
just ask Jake

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2005-05-21 08:55 PM

Slide over me
that I might like sand
  be moved in the wet of you
   then blown on wind to lie
    until the moon again visits the tide

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