Open Poetry #19 |
Spirits United (CHOKA) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Spirits United (Choka) Your heart touches me with tender simplicity. I'm lost in your love a gift from heaven above. Paint my world with you in pallets of loving hue. Peace rains down on me together we'll always be. Spirits united as one. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-15-2002 12:55 PM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nicely done, You took the form and molded it with your emotion Showing your talent of expression. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is very pretty.... Connie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes you did a wonderful job, Donna As Always Maureen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile, this is a beauitufl choka! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your spirit forever dance with his in loves enchantment! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ As always very loving and beautiful.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good. |
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