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Carolina
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0 posted 2002-03-15 12:43 PM


Give to me the sunrise
Place it in my hand
To remind me of beginnings
And all that we have planned.

Give to me the sunshine
Place it in my heart
To remind me of the warmth of love
That will never let us part.

Give to me the sunset
Place it at my feet
To remind me of days gone by
And memories to hold sweet.

Give to me the twinkling stars
Place them in my eyes
To remind me of the wishes made
As we gazed upon the skies.

Give to me the moonlight
Place it in my soul
To remind me of you and I
And how together we make a whole.


Live today as if it's your last.  Love today as if it's your first.   Lisa

© Copyright 2002 Lisa - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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1 posted 2002-03-15 01:43 PM


What a cool write! I love poems of nature and how nature inspires us... I love this! Be well!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-03-15 02:30 PM


This beautiful, Carolina, & flows so wonderfully...

*smiles*
~Tier

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3 posted 2002-03-15 08:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever offer you the light of the sun and may you forever see the sun rise in his eyes with love everyday for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carolina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-15 09:23 PM



This is lovely...I would wish you all that you ask for!...

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5 posted 2002-03-15 09:37 PM


Lovely Carolina and my wish is that you get it all. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-03-15 10:40 PM


Carolina,
You've hit my weakness again! Romance and nature combined. Awesome images so well related to love. Thanks a bunch!

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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7 posted 2002-03-16 12:05 PM


How very lovely this was, I enjoyed it so much.
ethome
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8 posted 2002-03-17 03:54 AM


I really like these types of poems....very nicely done!
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