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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-03-15 11:16 AM



What did I do?
What do you want from me?
Why can't You People
let me be?

You have no proof!
Are you following?
You're blatent lies
I'm not swallowing!

What's wrong with you?
Why are you here?
You probably want
to feel my fear!

Isn't that true?
Hot on my trail
You are so sure
that I will fail!

Oh, I know you!
Just keep away!
I'm aware of the sick
games you play!

Who are you?
What do you see?
Why won't You People
quit following me?!

Yeah, yeah..., sure, sure...,
You're just going to the same store?
Uh huh... Now I'm getting annoyed
What?! I Am Not Being Paranoid!

© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-15 11:24 AM


HAHAHA this is great, Now days you do have to look behind you dont you? I loved this. good work. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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2 posted 2002-03-15 11:25 AM


I feel this way sometimes.
good write.

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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3 posted 2002-03-15 11:51 AM


What did I do?
What do you want from me?
Why can't You People
let me be?

Sounds like many people I know. But not me.
I like it, though, LOL.. May I give you my version?

Whee! Look here at me
Can't you all see?
I am so free
Merrily, happily.

Please! don't let me be
Come with me
Let's swim the sea
And fly to stars, Wheee!



((Bonnie))
-newell

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4 posted 2002-03-15 11:56 AM




(giggles) Oh my gosh, I know this feeling ever so much too, I too always get shy and timid when others are following me, it's as if they can read your mind and that thought is eerie to me! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Morcastlin
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5 posted 2002-03-15 12:58 PM


Thanks all! I wrote this for a poetry challenge at another site. The topic was paranoia. ;o)

Love,
Bonnie

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