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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-03-15 10:35 AM



I am not
the personification
of articulation
or fancy words
wrapped in pretty "knows"
nor metaphorical whispers
in a kaleidoscope of
colors that glow
There's nothing
extraordinarily
complex to show,
simply turn my pages
& read,

me...

~Tier
3/100

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (03-15-2002 10:36 AM).]

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bslicker
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1 posted 2002-03-15 10:37 AM


ok reading
good write

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-03-15 10:40 AM


Thanks Bernie!

*smiles*
~Tier

Morcastlin
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3 posted 2002-03-15 11:04 AM


There is much beauty in simplicity! When you get past all of the baggage anyway, it all starts from a simple beginning. This is an excellent auto-bio poem!!! I love it!

Love,
Bonnie

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2002-03-15 11:09 AM


Thank you, Bonnie!

*hugs*

~Tier

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5 posted 2002-03-15 11:30 AM


Tiers, how nice this is, I love the originality of it. Just you is a lot. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-03-15 11:53 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always touch our hearts, for you always write so lovingly and sincerely with all your heart feels! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-03-15 12:47 PM


Just loved this!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Duncan
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8 posted 2002-03-15 02:12 PM


There's nothing
extraordinarily
complex to show,
simply turn my pages
& read,

me...

I particularly enjoyed you on page 42, Tier.  And 27 and 15 were great, too!

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-03-15 02:14 PM


Floria, you are far too kind! Thank you! *hugs*

Noah, Whenever I feel down, I only need to read one of your comments! *smiles* thank you!

Michael, Thank you much, kind sir!  

*chuckling* Is that so, Duncan,?  Well, just wait until you get to page 56!
*smiles*
~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (03-15-2002 02:17 PM).]

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