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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Change I've grown up alot In the last four years Maybe it's a natural process When shed so many tears But I'm not scared anymore Of life and what it brings For I've lost and fought hard For many of things I'm strong and weak All at the same time I find that I'm important now And like what is mine My kids I adore Even tho High maintance They may be My job means alot There I can give back What was once given me My opions are important Simply because they are mine Tho I love to write I seldom have time I guess what I'm tring to Get at is I love you more Then all of this Beacuse I've grown I'm not willing to loose Me again So we can't play games And try to controle With this new begin Just relax Love me for Who I am and am not For Babe in reality Thats all that I've got By Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 Jan. 28, 2002 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoy the sentiment in this Dare to be yourself Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Zinsser, I don't know what my opinion is worth, but I feel you are speaking of a trinity of three. Your child your lover and yourself. The poem is clear enough. We all learn about life as we live it. How we process that knowledge is up to you. Change will continue to be eternal but we will not. So the best path would be to do what good you can while you are here so that the doubtful humanity of the future will benefit. And that apply's to all three. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!WELL SAID...IT TAKES TRUE INNER STRENGTH TO BE TRUE TO YOURSELF...  **big hugs**HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Zinsser - well written. I believe that at some time or another we finally realize that we are just we. And are happy with it, even though others close to us are not... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I totally understand this and agree. As we grow and change and find ourselves, at times we have to hang onto that tight to that part of us, when children, spouses, and day to day events come into play. Especially when we find we love to write...I know I don't ever want to lose that part of myself, which is still so new and interesting. Oh dear...I'm rambling on here....great write and enjoyed by this reader very much! ~Valentine Hugs to You and Yours, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I was hanging on your every word as each one spoke so clearly to me. It is important to never lose sight of who and what we are all about. Like it or lump it, love me or leave me.  Thank you for this poem of yours. |
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