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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-15 01:18 AM


Enough Love For A Lifetime

If within my heart was a thought to love you forever
could I and would I be up to the task to blend us closer together?
Could I find the right words to say unto you that would provide the desired reaction?
Could I take the correct course of action that would lead us to a place of happiness and satisfaction?

Since forever is such a long, long time I can only hope and pray that my heart will allow me this treasure to love you forever
and if not at least give me the time to experience the pleasure of enough love to last for a lifetime.

JamesLee
March15
2002


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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-03-15 02:02 AM


James,
Choose right and it is forever and one day more! Good questions.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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2 posted 2002-03-15 10:14 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, I just know with a loving heart like yours you will always make your love so very happy and you are destined to share true happiness with her for eternity! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I wish for all these dreams to come true for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-15 10:16 AM


BRAVO!!!! I love the way you put it....I think you have more than enough love to give for a lifetime...So wonderfully well done, James...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-03-15 11:03 AM


James darling boy, oh my how much I love this poem, it has a pure joy about it.

If you have enough love for two
You have enough to last you all through
As long as you have enough for today
You’ll have enough for love to stay
Give all you have and there’ll be more
Love enough to make your heart soar
Do you have enough? I think you do
As long as you have enough for two

Wonderful utterly wonderful writing
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-03-15 11:07 AM


Great write.
And yes forever is forever.
Through the good and the bad.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-03-15 11:29 AM


James, always from your heart, and another lovely write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-03-15 02:09 PM


Awwwwwww...this was so sweet. It reminded me of a question we ask each other when our hearts are just overflowing with affection, sometimes we ask it at the same time...we often ask, "Can I love you forever?" and you know, the answer is always, "You'd better!" with the biggest smile we can muster. Thanks for the sweet reminder today.
Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-03-15 02:18 PM


...Wonderful!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Aimster
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9 posted 2002-03-15 06:17 PM


james,

a lovely poem! i believe that even
though sometimes we can't love FOREVER
for that is such a vast amount of time
as long as we love the best we can
with the time we have...that makes up
for what we might be able to have. hope
that makes sense. take care.

amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

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