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The Song In Your Voice
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The Song In Your Voice |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Song In Your Voice A whisper heard across the miles caressing heart and soul Heartfelt feelings absent of wiles just wanting to console The song in your voice rings clearly, feeling your want flow out Sang out with pure sincerity honest need without doubt Sharing the lonely pain that you feel for a love willing share I wrap soft words that can’t conceal the depth my words declare The song in your voice beckons me to arms that hold me tight Released to let the heart fly free while our passions ignite A kiss from the touch of your voice pulses within my veins As you make my senses rejoice love’s tears down my face rains The song in your voice fills my ears, so gently I’m caressed Making up for the empty years when such love was repressed Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
What can I say I turn to read your poetry and expect optimism..a song in your heart that is reflected here..its wonderful to be so disposed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, the song in your heart found its way to your pen.... and the words are simply beautiful! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Nothing repressed here. Great job. Nice images and gentle love. Well done.  Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So well done. I like the honesty and the ownership of feelings... too often given up and given in Very beautiful and well deserved. ThisDiamond |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, this is very, very beautiful. Again you have inspired me to write you a poem. "I listen", posted in a new thread. Thank you for the immense joy you bring to me with your writing. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-15-2002 12:04 AM).] |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
So uplifting! Why do any of us repress or deny caring when it is what we all need and need to give. Beautiful thought. You said it so well. Shenachie |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great warite I like this Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
quote: I especially enjoyed these lines! How wonderful it is when that beautiful song releases repressed emotions so they can join in the sweet harmony...beautifully done Karen! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is just beautiful! Excellent write and so much enjoyed! Thank you! BTW, I love the title! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A song of love, as always, you do so well. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A song of the heart sung to one... Your words are always beautiful and inspiring to us all. Gosh, now I am going to have to write..come on muse....hop to it... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'making up for the empty years' sigh. If only... Well done. Nan |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen I missed your poetry so so much. I have not been able to be on here as much and I keep missing your work and don't have time to go looking for it. So now, here is one of your wonderful poems to make my day brighter. lovely one. floria Floria |
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