Open Poetry #19 |
I Recall |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I Recall AMK 3/12/02 I recall your beautiful face staring up at me With love in your eyes of green and blue Feeling the delicate softness of your skin I've never witnessed a love that is more true When your lips touched mine in that first moment I closed my eyes thanking our sweet Lord above As my hands became tangled in your hair We whispered our words of love Feeling your body against me Sending shivers down my spine I held onto you tightly as we made love As I declared to the world you are mine I swear the Earth moved that day closer to Heaven Or perhaps Heaven just moved a bit closer to you and me All I know is a happiness I've never known entered my soul And it left me completely free And when the motion stopped and all was still I looked down into your loving eyes As you touched my face with your fingertips The room full of loving sighs I slipped the diamond onto your finger As I asked you to be my partner for life As tears of happiness and love rained down my cheeks You accepted my proposal to be my wife In those final moments when you were to depart I wished that time would stand still Knowing in my heart I'd been touched my an Angel Still though not quite believing it was real You told me that you loved me That you would soon return where you belong And as I pulled out from the airport parking lot I heard a familiar song... Have you ever by Brandy As I looked up at the sky I turned my eyes to see your plane The sunshine that had been pouring down Suddenly turned to rain I felt the tears wet upon my cheek As I gave you a soft goodbye Though it's not forever my love Still these tears I do cry You have my heart forever You are the only one for me I stand here before you a changed woman No longer blinded, I now can see You have my soul for always You broke the chains of pain It's with your neverending beauty and grace That I shall never be the same Jena... Thank you my love for all that you have done and continue to do. Being with you these past few days has been the ulitmate dream come true. I will see you soon if not in our dreams. Take care. I LOVE YOU!! [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-13-2002 12:48 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, this brought tears to my eyes because this is soooooooo breathtakingly lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is such a gorgeous memory I am so happy you've shared with us all, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
amy...this is so beautiful...and it is so nice to hear you are in love...helen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis, OH MY STARS this is without doubt one of your utter best it is utterly wonderful. This poem is absolutely wonderful, it simply flows with love. How stunning is this poem darling heart the flow is divine all the way through, excellent writing really excellent As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, I love this Your happiness is so wonderful, and I'm glad you choose to share it. Love is such a beautiful thing isn't it Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a beautiful poem Amy, thank you for sharing it and giving us all the pleasure of your happiness Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy!!!!!! she said yes!! wooooooohooooooo for you!!! right on sweetie, I am so happy for you!!! this poem is so wonderful thank you for letting us know how it went! |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie / almost sister Amy hi there, NOW this is REAL POETRY, I like this a lot well written and beautiful in it’s melodic way. Congratulations to you and J, this really is a beautiful piece of writing, and I’m so pleased everything went well for you. Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is a beautiful story Amy and you told it well. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your replies to this poem...in my opinion this is my best poem that i've wrote...it was very special to me, a very special moment in my life and im glad i shared it with all of you! take care and i love you guys. amy "just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart" |
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