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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-03-12 07:33 PM


I Recall
AMK
3/12/02

I recall your beautiful face staring up at me
With love in your eyes of green and blue
Feeling the delicate softness of your skin
I've never witnessed a love that is more true

When your lips touched mine in that first moment
I closed my eyes thanking our sweet Lord above
As my hands became tangled in your hair
We whispered our words of love

Feeling your body against me
Sending shivers down my spine
I held onto you tightly as we made love
As I declared to the world you are mine

I swear the Earth moved that day closer to Heaven
Or perhaps Heaven just moved a bit closer to you and me
All I know is a happiness I've never known entered my soul
And it left me completely free

And when the motion stopped and all was still
I looked down into your loving eyes
As you touched my face with your fingertips
The room full of loving sighs

I slipped the diamond onto your finger
As I asked you to be my partner for life
As tears of happiness and love rained down my cheeks
You accepted my proposal to be my wife

In those final moments when you were to depart
I wished that time would stand still
Knowing in my heart I'd been touched my an Angel
Still though not quite believing it was real

You told me that you loved me
That you would soon return where you belong
And as I pulled out from the airport parking lot
I heard a familiar song...

Have you ever by Brandy

As I looked up at the sky
I turned my eyes to see your plane
The sunshine that had been pouring down
Suddenly turned to rain

I felt the tears wet upon my cheek
As I gave you a soft goodbye
Though it's not forever my love
Still these tears I do cry

You have my heart forever
You are the only one for me
I stand here before you a changed woman
No longer blinded, I now can see

You have my soul for always
You broke the chains of pain
It's with your neverending beauty and grace
That I shall never be the same

Jena...
Thank you my love for all that you have done and continue to do. Being with you these past few days has been the ulitmate dream come true. I will see you soon if not in our dreams. Take care.
I LOVE YOU!!

[This message has been edited by Aimster (03-13-2002 12:48 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-12 07:43 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, this brought tears to my eyes because this is soooooooo breathtakingly lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is such a gorgeous memory I am so happy you've shared with us all, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-12 07:56 PM


amy...this is so beautiful...and it is so nice to hear you are in love...helen
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3 posted 2002-03-12 08:18 PM


Amy darling lil sis, OH MY STARS this is without doubt one of your utter best it is utterly wonderful. This poem is absolutely wonderful, it simply flows with love.

How stunning is this poem darling heart the flow is divine all the way through, excellent writing really excellent

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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4 posted 2002-03-12 11:22 PM


Amy,

    I love this Your happiness is so wonderful, and I'm glad you choose to share it.  Love is such a beautiful thing isn't it

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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5 posted 2002-03-13 10:10 AM


This is such a beautiful poem Amy, thank you for sharing it and giving us all the pleasure of your happiness

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

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6 posted 2002-03-13 10:30 AM


Amy!!!!!! she said yes!!
wooooooohooooooo for you!!!
right on sweetie, I am so happy for you!!!

this poem is so wonderful
thank you for letting us know how it went!

Krissy
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7 posted 2002-03-13 05:44 PM


Auntie / almost sister Amy hi there, NOW this is REAL POETRY, I like this a lot well written and beautiful in it’s melodic way.

Congratulations to you and J, this really is a beautiful piece of writing, and I’m so pleased everything went well for you.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


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at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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8 posted 2002-03-13 05:51 PM


This is a beautiful story Amy and you told it well. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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9 posted 2002-03-13 06:29 PM


...Beautiful...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Aimster
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10 posted 2002-03-15 04:09 PM


thank you all for your replies to
this poem...in my opinion this is my
best poem that i've wrote...it was very
special to me, a very special moment
in my life and im glad i shared it with
all of you! take care and i love you guys.

amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

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