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Open Poetry #19

Inhaling You (Choka)

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-03-14 06:27 PM

(Choka)

Inhaling You

Holding your shirt close
Inhaling the scent of you
Memories rush in
Emotions flooding my heart
Laughter and tears too
Together were a fortress
Built to withstand life
My gift, love, to you is free

My soul, me, you hold the key

Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (03-14-2002 06:32 PM).]

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2002-03-14 06:29 PM

Nice write Connie

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-03-14 06:32 PM

Great Choka!

((Zinsser))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-03-14 06:40 PM

Bslicker & Silver
Thanks ever so much..... : )

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-14 08:27 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever breathe the joys of love with your sweetheart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-03-14 08:40 PM

So well done... a beautiful tribute. ThisDiamond

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