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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-03-14 06:27 PM



(Choka)


Inhaling You


Holding your shirt close
Inhaling the scent of you
Memories rush in
Emotions flooding my heart
Laughter and tears too
Together were a fortress
Built to withstand life
My gift, love, to you is free

My soul, me, you hold the key


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (03-14-2002 06:32 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-14 06:29 PM


Nice write Connie

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2 posted 2002-03-14 06:32 PM


Great Choka!

((Zinsser))
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Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-03-14 06:40 PM


Bslicker & Silver
Thanks ever so much.....  : )

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4 posted 2002-03-14 08:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever breathe the joys of love with your sweetheart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-14 08:40 PM


So well done... a beautiful tribute. ThisDiamond

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